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Post by Dai on Feb 15, 2010 19:58:22 GMT -5
Name: Edward Elric Age: 15 Gender: Male Personality: Short.... tempered. Appearance: Short. Origin of Power: His height. And he also saw through some random big door. Special Abilities: He's short. Powers First Stage: When he claps his hands, some sparkly CG effect appears. When he does that, HE MAKES AWESOME STUFF!
He just needs to remember the one rule. Otherwise bad things happen. Powers Second Stage: None. He's too short for them. Skill Level: Special Items: Advanced Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced Skill Level: Speed and Agility: Advanced Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced History/Background: Shorter than he is. RP Sample: "WHO ARE YOU CALLING SUCH A SHRIMP THAT YOU CAN'T SEE HIM!!!"
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Otahu
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Post by Otahu on Feb 16, 2010 2:14:51 GMT -5
You're so funny.
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Post by Shinigami Kyra on Feb 16, 2010 3:28:23 GMT -5
You forgot that after he claps his hands, there's like this sparkly effect. That's why this application was denied in the first place.
History is too long, shorten it.
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Post by Dai on Feb 16, 2010 16:27:29 GMT -5
Ok... how about now?
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Post by Shinigami Kyra on Feb 18, 2010 22:52:31 GMT -5
Obviously, you're not getting this. When I mean shorten it, I did not mean 'LENGTHEN IT.' Please ADJUST your APPLICATION by SHORTENING the HISTORY.
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Post by Dai on Feb 20, 2010 23:44:50 GMT -5
Ok. NOW?!
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Post by Shinigami Kyra on Feb 24, 2010 4:37:04 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but as a Winry/Alfonse fan, I just can't accept an application this short
*gets trampled by Ed Fangirls*
A...A...Ac...Ack....septed?
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