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Post by taki on Mar 27, 2010 11:07:31 GMT -5
edited
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Post by Rebel Raven on Mar 27, 2010 14:59:42 GMT -5
"To someone of three tiers or higher above her the attack will still do a moderate amount of damage, " Hell no. You're not going to be fighting above tier like that. No one gets to.
What does a Gillian have to do with your character's tier? Or anyone's tier for that matter? They vary somewhat in tiers like anyone else.
And we don't like moves that are intended to be outight fatal.
I suggest you look at other accepted apps to help understand what we expect out of a power.
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Post by taki on Mar 27, 2010 17:17:27 GMT -5
Edited again. I think as it is a one-use attack it should be ok for a it to be a bit powerful. Afterall she cannot change the direction or anything. However, I have reduced the fatality level significantly. Furthermore, going from the manga and anime gillian are generally all about the same power so relating it's effect to that of one of their cero should be ok. However, it seems you disagree and therefore if you deny it this time I will likely re-do the power or perhaps give up on this app.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Mar 27, 2010 23:49:31 GMT -5
I suggest you look at other applications and read the guide. Outright fatal powers aren't allowed. After all, how would YOU like it if people used potentially fatal powers on your characters? If you don't like it, why would we let -you- have them?
We don't completely go by manga, and anime, but since you wanna go by those, some Menos can worry captains, some can be slaughtered by lieutenants, or even Hantaro who's -7th seat- in the anime.
Their powers are not standardized.
They're even less standard on the board as they can vary in tiers.
It's up to you if you decide to give up on the app, or continue working on it.
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Post by taki on Mar 28, 2010 8:41:09 GMT -5
Edited. The power has been severely reduced and i have removed all mention of fatalities.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Mar 28, 2010 17:38:56 GMT -5
"but will only do a minor amount of damage to someone of two tiers or above." means severely reduced? Two tiers is STILL a TON of power. And this means you harm people above tier. 1 tier above will receive who knows what sort of damage.
Lemme explain something to you. People aren't supposed to readily harm people tiers above them. That's why we have tiers.
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Post by Shinigami Kyra on Mar 28, 2010 18:32:21 GMT -5
I'm giving this application one more chance to be edited properly. If you cannot do that, then this application will be denied due to the inability to limit your character's abilities. Raven has given you several chances on both this application and the previous incarnation.
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Post by taki on Mar 29, 2010 10:34:04 GMT -5
Edited and if you deny it tbh i don't care. I have tried my best.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Mar 29, 2010 18:30:22 GMT -5
This app is denied, then. You continually want to readily harm people above tier.
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