ogihci
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Muffin's Hollow Knight Franny's Dogi Ai's Slave[M:0]
^Look at what your app made me do...
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Post by ogihci on Jun 14, 2010 16:51:11 GMT -5
Done and sorry about that I must have spaced.
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Post by Sam on Jun 14, 2010 19:47:59 GMT -5
So I have been commissioned to take over this app and with that I'll looked it over in a few.
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Post by Sam on Jun 16, 2010 2:31:44 GMT -5
History needs to be fixed. How can a low ranked officer have enough reitsu to evolve him to a Gillian? If you said something along the lines of attacking and eating a series of low ranked Shinigami, that would make sense. It would take more then a few months to evolve from a regular Hollow to a Gillian, years that would be better.
In your power section, one for res that is, we only allow two for starting Arrancar. I know it says three, but the template gave you two and you must follow the template. Kyra has mention that is was a typo on his part so please remove one power. Which one is up to you, just be sure to remove one.
After that, I see nothing wrong with it. Just fix it and I'll give it a look over.
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ogihci
Global Moderator
Muffin's Hollow Knight Franny's Dogi Ai's Slave[M:0]
^Look at what your app made me do...
Posts: 844
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Post by ogihci on Jun 16, 2010 2:46:35 GMT -5
ok i have removed one of the powers and i have put in the history that it took him twenty years to become a Gillian.
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Post by Sam on Jun 16, 2010 11:11:48 GMT -5
Alright, now just change your Numero number. Arja has claimed 13, so change it to something else.
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ogihci
Global Moderator
Muffin's Hollow Knight Franny's Dogi Ai's Slave[M:0]
^Look at what your app made me do...
Posts: 844
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Post by ogihci on Jun 16, 2010 12:31:07 GMT -5
*sniffle* my lucky number gone, gone for all eternity.
Number has been switched from 13 to 12.
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Post by Sam on Jun 16, 2010 13:06:41 GMT -5
OK Approved at Mid Level Average, but no stamp.
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