Post by zunga on Aug 19, 2010 16:34:10 GMT -5
Vizard Application
In Character
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General Information
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Name:Natsume ichimaru The little genuis.
Actual Age:130
Appearing Age:13
Gender: Male
Appearance:Black hair and Black eyes. He has a black t-shirt without sleeves. And a short black pants. Which he always wears. He always drags his Zanpakutō upside down. Even while he;'s fighting. And its not cause he's dumb. its cause he thinks its cool
Personality
He has a nice personality. He always smiles and is somewhere always annoyed. But when he's annoyed he never shows it. He simply smiles. He is a caring boy who alway sis nice to people. But from the inside he's crying. Waiting for someone to save him from the pain he has.
History
When h was birth he smiled. He had a fox face like ichimaru gin. His parents raised him to be nice. And to have respect for people. But he always had his fox face. When he got 100 someone annoyed him so bad. He killed him. Then he saw them on a chain. He was scared of what he had done. A shinigami came then. And he was suprised that he was seen. The shinigami putted Natsume on a shinigami academy.
When Natsume was on the shinigami academy. He was one of the best. He graduated 20 years after. He had many firends. He even had a girlfriend. Who he had to leave when he finished the academy.
Natsume always visited the academy. But one his last visit. It was dead silent. When he came there. He saw everyone dead. He immediatley tells this to shinigami's. It seemed that some hollow killed them. Natsume came in a path of avenge.
10 Years later on how old he is now. He trained very hard. When he got strong genough. But he didnt only train. He slayed many hollows. And even two meno's.
However, we do require a good lengthy history; 5 paragraph minimum, of five sentence minimum each. That's twenty five sentences, at the bare minimum; fairly easy. Each paragraph can hold a key point in their lives; it's simple. First paragraph, describing parents, birth, and where they grew up. Second paragraph, discovery of spiritual awareness and entrance into Shinigami Academy. Third paragraph, discovery of Shikai. Fourth paragraph can explain when and how they received their Vizard Mask and how exactly they went through the Hollowfication process. The fifth can be placed anywhere, and can hold key points in the character's life. See? Easy, I just gave you pretty much a template to work with.
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Skills
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Skills
Swordsmanship- Advance
Hohō - Advance
Kidō- Intermediate
Hand to Hand - Intermediate
For all races, you are limited to Two Advanced Categories at maximum, and Two Intermediate. These stats will not change, but simply reflect the potential of your character and how he or she advances.
Attributes
Speed:Advance
Intelligence:Advanced
Stamina:iIntermediate
Power:Intermediate
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Zanpakutō
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Name: Name of your Zanpakuto;Tira
Translation - This section is optional; if you use a name that is Japanese, you may place the English translation here.
Unreleased Appearance
A single paragraph is sufficient enough for this Appearance Description. Most Zanpakutō look like regular katana, with slight variations between them as one would expect between different swords. There variations are commonly: A long ninja katana, That has a thin but big blade. Its thin cause its strong and not easy or average to cut.
In addition to the upgraded forms, the sealed form of a Zanpakutō can also be radically altered, though such alterations are purely cosmetic and usually don't offer any significant advantage in battle; one exception is Ikkaku Madarame's Hōzukimaru, whose hilt stores a blood-clotting ointment.
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Zanpakutō Spirit
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Name:Tira
Gender:Female
Spirit Appearance
She has white long hair. With a school student clothing.
Personality
You've already done this for your character, so it's roughly the same deal here. Same as above, but with a minimum of one paragraph.
Relationship to Master
Similar to personality, this section is just a 'relationship' portion of the personality. While personality should be a wide variety of what he or she feels towards various views and so forth, this section should uphold their relationship towards your character; how they get along and so forth. One paragraph should be sufficient.
They are like best friends. And share the same personality. They never are scared if they are together. And both have a strong affection to eachother.
Inner World
Every Zanpakuto has an inner world in which it resides. It is within the Shinigami themselves. Please describe roughly in one paragraph what this inner world appears.
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Inner Hollow
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Name:Pain
Gender: Male
Appearance
Has black wide hair. Always a serious and selfish face. He has a six pack.
Personality
Loves to give pain to Natsume. He is a brutal violent a lethally-short temper. And is a blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic person. It hates to wait. And loves to make people wait.
Similar to Zanpakuto Spirit Personality section
Relationship to Master
Hates him from the beginning. But in the end they become good friends.
Similar to Zanpakuto Spirit Relationship section
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Hollow Abilities
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Mask Appearance and Summoning
General description for the Vizard mask, and how it's summoned. A generalized time frame for how long one can sustain the mask can also be listed, but be warned; Canon Vizards can only hold their masks for three minutes, and they're pretty much the powerhouse for Vizard applicants. We suggest a low time, and with upgrades, this time frame can be increased. Do NOT place 'Three Minutes' here. That is the absolute maximum for Vizards until Canon proves otherwise (Ichigo, of course, being a very special case, as well as Mashiro)
A minimum of 1 paragraph.
Hollow Abilities
Once the Vizard Mask is summoned forth, a Vizard is granted additional abilities. You may choose from the following list, or create your own abilities unique to your character's theme. Remember, these abilities are only granted when the mask is worn. No new applicants are able to wear their mask indefinitely.
Cero
Enhanced Spiritual Attributes
Telekinesis
You may visit the Bleach Wiki for more information on each ability. In accordance to Cero, we do allow a bit of originality, as we do for Arrancar.
Please use the following format for the abilities granted when the mask is summoned:
Name of Ability:Feeling pain
* Description of Attack: Try sto hit the target physically. If hit a little bit of Pain will be but in the target. The target will fall into the pain that Pain gives. And it will stun the one to.
* Limitation - 2 per match
Remember to abide by the Powers Guide and FAQ, like all abilities. A limit to two abilities max. Three may be allowed at times, but that will be on an app by app process.
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Zanpakutō Shikai
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Call Out Phrase:素敵な温かい笑顔
Translation - Optional; A nice warm smile
Shikai Appearance
Another Appearance section. I heavily suggest reading over the Powers FAQ section, which is the very next Chapter of the Guide. It will describe in more detail the limitations of Shikai in both appearance and abilities. A general description of what your Zanpakuto's first release appears. You may simply express the newly altered weapon, or the actual process. Do not post any abilities in this section. Abilities belong in the very next section, not here. A minimum of six sentences should be sufficient enough to describe the weapon, though if needed, a staff or moderator may ask for more.
Shikai Abilities
Here, you may list three abilities at max. Remember that all powers for all characters must have a specific overall theme. Also note that all race applicants must also abide by the Powers section located in the next chapter. For all powers and abilities, please make a list format, similar to this:
Name: Warm slash.
Description: Natsume will dashes at the enemy. When the enemy think he will atack forward. He uses his speed to come behind. He then slashes the enemy. And will go to his place again. The enemy will feel a happy warm feeling of an hug. And will fall on the ground with a huge pain afterwarths
type:Zanjutsu
Range:close
Limitation- People with high intelligence can block this.
Name: Duo blast
Description: Natsume will create a wave of spiritual energie into him. He makes a wave of it. And forms it. Then he adds it to his shikai. And then he will slash the air. Only to make a huge blast against the enemy
type:Zanjutsu/kido
Range:Ranged
Limitation- Is pretty slow so easy to dodge.
Name:Cant see my own movement
Description: Natsume will move so fast. He cant even see himself. As the opponent cant see him to. He will appear in the sky. Slashing the opponent many times. Only to use "Warm slash"After wards
type:Shunpo
Range:Ranged
Limitation- Can be seen by a really strong high spirutal power
Remember to make a limitation of your power. Powers with no limiters will not be accepted, and will be asked for limitations to be placed.
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Zanpakutō Bankai
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Did you notice the strike-through? That's because new applications will not have Bankai. For upgrades or achieving Bankai for existing/current Characters, please refer to the Upgrade section. The same formatting for Shikai should be used.
OOC Information
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Sample Post
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[Will do later have to go]
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Rules and Guide Agreement
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This is to ensure people are fully certain of the rules of this forum. If you submit 'Y' or 'Yes' to the first two questions, then we should not have to repeat ourselves. You have stated that you have understood the rules of this site, and have reviewed this very section of the Application Guide. As such, you should now understand how to fill out the application in full. If you have any questions, then please submit your queries to a Staff Member.
Character Counts are now expected to be submitted upon new applications. This is to help out the reviewing staff more than anything.
In Character
--------------------
General Information
--------------------
Name:Natsume ichimaru The little genuis.
Actual Age:130
Appearing Age:13
Gender: Male
Appearance:Black hair and Black eyes. He has a black t-shirt without sleeves. And a short black pants. Which he always wears. He always drags his Zanpakutō upside down. Even while he;'s fighting. And its not cause he's dumb. its cause he thinks its cool
Personality
He has a nice personality. He always smiles and is somewhere always annoyed. But when he's annoyed he never shows it. He simply smiles. He is a caring boy who alway sis nice to people. But from the inside he's crying. Waiting for someone to save him from the pain he has.
History
When h was birth he smiled. He had a fox face like ichimaru gin. His parents raised him to be nice. And to have respect for people. But he always had his fox face. When he got 100 someone annoyed him so bad. He killed him. Then he saw them on a chain. He was scared of what he had done. A shinigami came then. And he was suprised that he was seen. The shinigami putted Natsume on a shinigami academy.
When Natsume was on the shinigami academy. He was one of the best. He graduated 20 years after. He had many firends. He even had a girlfriend. Who he had to leave when he finished the academy.
Natsume always visited the academy. But one his last visit. It was dead silent. When he came there. He saw everyone dead. He immediatley tells this to shinigami's. It seemed that some hollow killed them. Natsume came in a path of avenge.
10 Years later on how old he is now. He trained very hard. When he got strong genough. But he didnt only train. He slayed many hollows. And even two meno's.
However, we do require a good lengthy history; 5 paragraph minimum, of five sentence minimum each. That's twenty five sentences, at the bare minimum; fairly easy. Each paragraph can hold a key point in their lives; it's simple. First paragraph, describing parents, birth, and where they grew up. Second paragraph, discovery of spiritual awareness and entrance into Shinigami Academy. Third paragraph, discovery of Shikai. Fourth paragraph can explain when and how they received their Vizard Mask and how exactly they went through the Hollowfication process. The fifth can be placed anywhere, and can hold key points in the character's life. See? Easy, I just gave you pretty much a template to work with.
--------------------
Skills
--------------------
Skills
Swordsmanship- Advance
Hohō - Advance
Kidō- Intermediate
Hand to Hand - Intermediate
For all races, you are limited to Two Advanced Categories at maximum, and Two Intermediate. These stats will not change, but simply reflect the potential of your character and how he or she advances.
Attributes
Speed:Advance
Intelligence:Advanced
Stamina:iIntermediate
Power:Intermediate
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Zanpakutō
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Name: Name of your Zanpakuto;Tira
Translation - This section is optional; if you use a name that is Japanese, you may place the English translation here.
Unreleased Appearance
A single paragraph is sufficient enough for this Appearance Description. Most Zanpakutō look like regular katana, with slight variations between them as one would expect between different swords. There variations are commonly: A long ninja katana, That has a thin but big blade. Its thin cause its strong and not easy or average to cut.
In addition to the upgraded forms, the sealed form of a Zanpakutō can also be radically altered, though such alterations are purely cosmetic and usually don't offer any significant advantage in battle; one exception is Ikkaku Madarame's Hōzukimaru, whose hilt stores a blood-clotting ointment.
--------------------
Zanpakutō Spirit
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Name:Tira
Gender:Female
Spirit Appearance
She has white long hair. With a school student clothing.
Personality
You've already done this for your character, so it's roughly the same deal here. Same as above, but with a minimum of one paragraph.
Relationship to Master
Similar to personality, this section is just a 'relationship' portion of the personality. While personality should be a wide variety of what he or she feels towards various views and so forth, this section should uphold their relationship towards your character; how they get along and so forth. One paragraph should be sufficient.
They are like best friends. And share the same personality. They never are scared if they are together. And both have a strong affection to eachother.
Inner World
Every Zanpakuto has an inner world in which it resides. It is within the Shinigami themselves. Please describe roughly in one paragraph what this inner world appears.
--------------------
Inner Hollow
--------------------
Name:Pain
Gender: Male
Appearance
Has black wide hair. Always a serious and selfish face. He has a six pack.
Personality
Loves to give pain to Natsume. He is a brutal violent a lethally-short temper. And is a blunt, sarcastic, and quite sadistic person. It hates to wait. And loves to make people wait.
Similar to Zanpakuto Spirit Personality section
Relationship to Master
Hates him from the beginning. But in the end they become good friends.
Similar to Zanpakuto Spirit Relationship section
--------------------
Hollow Abilities
--------------------
Mask Appearance and Summoning
General description for the Vizard mask, and how it's summoned. A generalized time frame for how long one can sustain the mask can also be listed, but be warned; Canon Vizards can only hold their masks for three minutes, and they're pretty much the powerhouse for Vizard applicants. We suggest a low time, and with upgrades, this time frame can be increased. Do NOT place 'Three Minutes' here. That is the absolute maximum for Vizards until Canon proves otherwise (Ichigo, of course, being a very special case, as well as Mashiro)
A minimum of 1 paragraph.
Hollow Abilities
Once the Vizard Mask is summoned forth, a Vizard is granted additional abilities. You may choose from the following list, or create your own abilities unique to your character's theme. Remember, these abilities are only granted when the mask is worn. No new applicants are able to wear their mask indefinitely.
Cero
Enhanced Spiritual Attributes
Telekinesis
You may visit the Bleach Wiki for more information on each ability. In accordance to Cero, we do allow a bit of originality, as we do for Arrancar.
Please use the following format for the abilities granted when the mask is summoned:
Name of Ability:Feeling pain
* Description of Attack: Try sto hit the target physically. If hit a little bit of Pain will be but in the target. The target will fall into the pain that Pain gives. And it will stun the one to.
* Limitation - 2 per match
Remember to abide by the Powers Guide and FAQ, like all abilities. A limit to two abilities max. Three may be allowed at times, but that will be on an app by app process.
--------------------
Zanpakutō Shikai
--------------------
Call Out Phrase:素敵な温かい笑顔
Translation - Optional; A nice warm smile
Shikai Appearance
Another Appearance section. I heavily suggest reading over the Powers FAQ section, which is the very next Chapter of the Guide. It will describe in more detail the limitations of Shikai in both appearance and abilities. A general description of what your Zanpakuto's first release appears. You may simply express the newly altered weapon, or the actual process. Do not post any abilities in this section. Abilities belong in the very next section, not here. A minimum of six sentences should be sufficient enough to describe the weapon, though if needed, a staff or moderator may ask for more.
Shikai Abilities
Here, you may list three abilities at max. Remember that all powers for all characters must have a specific overall theme. Also note that all race applicants must also abide by the Powers section located in the next chapter. For all powers and abilities, please make a list format, similar to this:
Name: Warm slash.
Description: Natsume will dashes at the enemy. When the enemy think he will atack forward. He uses his speed to come behind. He then slashes the enemy. And will go to his place again. The enemy will feel a happy warm feeling of an hug. And will fall on the ground with a huge pain afterwarths
type:Zanjutsu
Range:close
Limitation- People with high intelligence can block this.
Name: Duo blast
Description: Natsume will create a wave of spiritual energie into him. He makes a wave of it. And forms it. Then he adds it to his shikai. And then he will slash the air. Only to make a huge blast against the enemy
type:Zanjutsu/kido
Range:Ranged
Limitation- Is pretty slow so easy to dodge.
Name:Cant see my own movement
Description: Natsume will move so fast. He cant even see himself. As the opponent cant see him to. He will appear in the sky. Slashing the opponent many times. Only to use "Warm slash"After wards
type:Shunpo
Range:Ranged
Limitation- Can be seen by a really strong high spirutal power
Remember to make a limitation of your power. Powers with no limiters will not be accepted, and will be asked for limitations to be placed.
--------------------
Zanpakutō Bankai
--------------------
Did you notice the strike-through? That's because new applications will not have Bankai. For upgrades or achieving Bankai for existing/current Characters, please refer to the Upgrade section. The same formatting for Shikai should be used.
OOC Information
--------------------
Sample Post
--------------------
[Will do later have to go]
--------------------
Rules and Guide Agreement
--------------------
This is to ensure people are fully certain of the rules of this forum. If you submit 'Y' or 'Yes' to the first two questions, then we should not have to repeat ourselves. You have stated that you have understood the rules of this site, and have reviewed this very section of the Application Guide. As such, you should now understand how to fill out the application in full. If you have any questions, then please submit your queries to a Staff Member.
Character Counts are now expected to be submitted upon new applications. This is to help out the reviewing staff more than anything.
