With the Captains suffering casualties and heavy injuries on their side, all hope seemed to be lost... until Shinji Hirako appeared, along with the rest of the former Shinigami. Though the aid of the Vizards certainly helped to draw the battle in their favor, it seemed Aizen's power alone proved too much for them.
Post by Rebel Raven on Feb 26, 2010 18:44:14 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but the whole tale sounds a bit too far fetched for the world of Bleach. The world outside of Japan is out of their juristiction, and they don't take care of the entire world or else the Seireitei would hold millions of souls and be far larger than it is.
With that being said a Shinigami being sent to Russia is not likely at all.
Maybe if there's more details in the story, and the Shinigami staying in Japan it'll be more workable.
Post by Mikhail Rost on Feb 26, 2010 22:27:14 GMT -5
Okay in the interest of Simplicity i've cut out Paris altogether and put their meeting in Japan as required. As well as elaborated on their story a bit more, I like it better now I hope it works for you as well.
I also edited him knowing french as a language since i cut that part of their lives out he would have no need to know it. Please let me know if i can fix anything else to make this acceptable, thank you.
Mikhail Rost - Human - ML:S Sobek Kurokawa -Arrancar - HL:W Kimiko Kaneko - Shinigami - ML:A Ikkaku Madarame - Shinigami - HL:S Don Kan'onji - Human - LL:A
Post by Rebel Raven on Feb 27, 2010 1:01:21 GMT -5
Well obviously Grandma Jenova is his grandmother unless the guy's lucky enough to have multiple Shinigami in his lineage which is really unlikely.
Yes, you need to write out the circumstances of how she gave birth to Mikhail's parents, who took care of the child since, obviously she couldn't because it's against the law for a shinigami to have a human life, and she cannot take the child into the soul society alive, or if she went renegade, and possibly how she evaded the law.
Shinigami are not like the greek gods who snoo-snoo mortals and have families with them when ever thy feel like it. That's extremely detremimental to their line of work.
Then the lives of the child(ren) she had would be interesting, cliff notes at the least.
You glossed over a heck of a lot of details. Mikhail's parents for one thing.
Further, you -do- realizing you're asking for something we can't just allow for the sake of it coz once someone has an OC human descended form a Shinigami others will want it as well, right?
Even if you character would be what? A quarter shinigami after a generation?
I can't just let it be easy. We don't work that way. If you want something important like that we expect details on the matter.