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Post by Wicked on May 1, 2011 17:40:11 GMT -5
Do I need to link you to the exact post? I said something very key about where the code can be found in that topic. And yes, we do want people using the code. That's why it's in a CODE box. Where the CODE can be COPIED. What you copied was a preview of what the coding should appear as if entered correctly. Your application does not have any such coding. And why do we want people to use the coding so badly? For one, Kyra worked very hard coding that template in the first place. Secondly, it makes it clearer that our rules have at least been glimpsed at, rather than completely overlooked. By copying the very last post and assuming that it's the template, you are sending such negative impressions that you have not carefully studied the guide, but instead skipped to the bottom of the page in the assumption that most sites put the entire template there. Now I'm not saying this is necessarily what you have done, but based on past experiences, it seems to be the common thing to do. However, in case you did what I assume most new members do in the case of a long(ish) post, here's the link to the template, put your application into it and I'll give it a full review. bleach200.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=gotopost&board=rules&thread=8463&post=57164 |
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Post by shinigami27 on May 1, 2011 21:40:37 GMT -5
ok so I was looking over the code and I know I have to delete the blockquotes, and all the things in brackets, but what about the number signs and 3s? I'm so confused.I've never had to use a code before, so I'm a little lost. Sorry
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Post by Wicked on May 2, 2011 5:40:41 GMT -5
You don't delete anything. The only thing you should delete is the "3-4 paragraphs" that you might find in the history, but never delete anything in the brackets, or the brackets themselves. Basically, open up an edit window in one tab, and the post in another. Copy and paste the text from each section, highlight the "4-5 paragraphs" or whatever, and paste. Or if it's not there, then just paste it in.
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Post by shinigami27 on May 2, 2011 15:33:36 GMT -5
ooooo ok lol thank you and I I've realized that your tough on applications, but I relaize why. Thank you for being "tough" with me lol I think it's helped me realize what you want
Again, thank you, and sorry for the trouble. What about the sample post?
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Post by Wicked on May 2, 2011 16:33:38 GMT -5
Wait... Didn't you have one last I checked?
And you still need to put the application into the proper template.
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Post by shinigami27 on May 2, 2011 17:21:22 GMT -5
i did? Which means i have to have one if I don't?
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Post by Wicked on May 2, 2011 18:10:49 GMT -5
Excuse me for a second...
No shit, Sherlock.
Why would we put something in the template, write guides on it, or hell, even mention it if we didn't want people to use it?!
That's enough. I don't want to see any replies or I'm denying this app for failure to use the template after repeated instruction to do so. You don't reply until everything has been put into the template. Including your apparent nonexistent RP sample.
I'm not going to sit here pulling out my hair because you decided you don't like the coding on the template. Either put your application into the template, or forget about passing an app.
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Post by shinigami27 on May 2, 2011 21:53:29 GMT -5
k, I'm pretty sure I got it right this time. Sorry
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Post by Wicked on May 3, 2011 6:01:41 GMT -5
Things I missed because I've been out of the swing of things: "He does however have an earring in his right ear that he attaches to you to track you," is vague and denied. No appearance weapons.
Personality: Could use a flaw.
History: Get the present test out of your history. It's called history because it happened in the past. I already said this once, and I shouldn't have to say it again. Secondly, you turn this into a personality rather than a past towards the end. It should be, "what happened to this guy to make him who he is today." Need an example? Check the sample apps. The entire last paragraph is not a history. And neither is this: "He is also not romantic at all."
That's just random.
Spirit: Same confusion with the spirit wanting to get stronger - and do not explain it to me here, explain it in the app.
Powers
Dokudokushii Bukko Hitokire: NEVER compare powers to any canon characters.
Range should be in numbers, rather than "close." Secondly, what does the poison do? Five minutes is an eternity in battle, so what does it do that you can't tell us? How much energy does it take? Who can resist it?
At this point, I highly suggest you read all of the rules and guides. More specifically, use them.
Karisutari Shirudo: How big is the shield? How strong is the shield? How much damage can it take before it shatters? What if a person weaker than him attacks it? What if a person stronger than him attacks him? How much reiatsu does it take to create? To hold?
Refer to the guides and rules about this, and the tier system.
Bakuhatsuteki Kumo Uwadzutsumi: The entire earing thing is ridiculous. How far can it sense? What's up with the "you probably won't be able to find it or take it off" nonsense?
Screw it, this as it is is denied. I don't have the patience to tell you everything that's wrong with it, but everything above should give you a hint. Rewrite this entirely, it's not salvageable as is.
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Post by shinigami27 on May 3, 2011 22:09:19 GMT -5
K, I've changed everything you have told me to change, however I didn't change my idea completely. It is still the same basic stuff, along with everything you told me to change. I hope you like.
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