With the Captains suffering casualties and heavy injuries on their side, all hope seemed to be lost... until Shinji Hirako appeared, along with the rest of the former Shinigami. Though the aid of the Vizards certainly helped to draw the battle in their favor, it seemed Aizen's power alone proved too much for them.
Shikai Appearance: So I'm curious. Are the points on the sword 40cm apart as in from a "line" through the "center" of the sword? Or are they each 40cm long?
Nami - Ok, last chance on this. TIER LIMITATIONS. WHERE? I still have almost exactly the same problem with this ability. Secondly, what's with the sudden shield ability? That would have to be a separate ability with separate limitations.
Dendou - Stop claiming certain bakudo can stop it; that would depend on the person casting the kido. You need actual tier limitations.
Bakuhatsu - Is it PASSIVE or something he has to CAST?
See my earlier reviews for more information about your powers.
Ok, now I'm getting annoyed. Stop being so stubborn about this and read the guides, fix your powers accordingly.
Character List "Let's eat, Grandma!" "Let's eat Grandma!" Commas save lives.
Ok, ok. I am sorry that I was being stubborn, even though I was not trying to be. I decided to scrap the last ability till I can actually find a way to work it in that would be alright, or maybe just leave it gone. Anyway, I hope I have done it, but I'm sure there is something that could use some editing. Just let me know.
Post by Rebel Raven on Aug 30, 2011 22:21:32 GMT -5
Okie dokie, I'll be making this review. Lets hope this doesn't spill over to the third page which isn't a good sign!
Nami Shingai has the tier affects asked for. It seems a bit overpowering though. 15 feet wide, and a range of 30 feet? That's a gigantic projectile!
Planning on nearly killing humans in one hit? Seems that way, judging by your willingness to nearly stop a human heart in one hit.
Dendou denka: So he has a big electrical ball that extends 2.5 meters or so away from the tip of his sword? That'd kinda make it near impossible to dodge, or block as it's well over the arm span of most anyone, including their sword, wouldn't it?
Further, it's large enough that it'd probably go beyond his wrist and shock him.
If it isn't a ball of shock, you sure don't describe it as otherwise. if it is a ball of shock, it comes off as a bit godmod.
Also, how long does this ability last once activated?