With the Captains suffering casualties and heavy injuries on their side, all hope seemed to be lost... until Shinji Hirako appeared, along with the rest of the former Shinigami. Though the aid of the Vizards certainly helped to draw the battle in their favor, it seemed Aizen's power alone proved too much for them.
Post by Shinigami Kyra on Sept 15, 2009 0:32:31 GMT -5
Greetings and salutations, my name is Kyra, and I'll be the one to review your profile. First, I would like you to visit the APPLICATIONS FAQ, which can be found on the Applications section of the forum. Announcement threads are also posted throughout every subforum, so the thread itself should be relatively easy to find.
First, I would like to point out that your appearance needs a bit of work; the picture does not show up. Not only that, but pictures should not entirely replace a properly written description. There are a few spelling and grammar errors that need to be fixed, but aside from that, everything looks pretty good. Just work a bit on your appearance, and you should be fine.