Mugen Saito - Wanted Vizard [DONE]

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Name: Mugen Saito
Age: 487
Gender: Male
Personality:

Mugen's personality is laid back and nonchalant, as he tries to mold himself to his expectations of how someone "cool" would act. He often expresses how he feels about some situations by either claiming that something is "cool" or "not cool." Being a supposedly cool guy, he prefers to use the direct approach which most of the time fails. However, one thing he has gained from all the years of being "cool", is he is possibly one of the most loyal people one could possibly meet, especially since breaking promises and changing sides "isn't at all cool in the least."

Mugen currently only lives for himself, and himself alone right now. He doesn't hold much connection with others currently, but he's open to making new friends.

Appearance:

Mugen is simply short and slim compared to most of his combatants. His hair is naturally a dark black and his eyes remain an obvious dark red color. His teeth appear to be razor sharp and adds on to his sarcastic character.

Mugen's body is usually covered in a black suit with a white collared undershirt with a matching black tie to pull it all together. The suit wears tight and firm to reveal most of Mugen's physical features.

Hollow Mask:

The mask looks similar to that of a human skull with large horns that resemble a demon's, stretching from the top. There are two black stripes that reach down from the forehead of the mask to the bottom of the chin. The teeth are razor sharp, worse then that of Mugen's own.

Mugen's mask is quite different from other Vizards in the fact that it covers his entire face and acts as a part of it. The jaw and teeth act as if they were Mugen's own, and act in unison compared to his own.

Hollow Powers:

Sonído - The Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami Flash Steps and the Quincy Hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of Sonído is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound caused by Flash Steps.

Irrompible - An ability only keen to that of Mugen Saito. This ability is similar to that of Hierro, except for a few differences. When Mugen uses this ability, an irregular shapped layer of white skin appears anywhere on the body that Mugen Saito feels. The skin looks as if its made of the same ingredients of a Hollow Mask, but can only stretch out to a twelve inch radius. The white material or skin is made of condensed spiritual energy which makes it similar to that of the Hierro.

What makes this so different from Hierro is the fact that Mugen is capable of creating weapons, such as spikes, swords and other piercing weapons by will. The weapons, or objects will be expressed through the white layer of skin. They can be broken off and used in battle like typical weapons and can very durable. It gets easier and easier to create different weapons as Mugen achieves more and more Hollow stages.

Inner Hollow:

Mugen's inner hollow appears to be a mirror of his current self. The only differences are the change of hair color to white, the suit also becoming white, along with the tie, and the under shirt becoming black. Mugen's inner hollow's skin also becomes very pale and his eyes change to that of a hollow's.

Mugen's inner hollow often commands him around, telling him to kill anyone who stands in his path. He's often manipulative and persuasive and can convince Mugen to do things he never really meant to do in the first place. Mugen's inner hollow believes that Mugen can harness great power and he works as a great host.

Zampakuto's name:

Giroshin.

Zampakuto Spirit:

Giroshin's appearance is almost a reflection of the stereotypical demon, featuring a horned head and red complexion. His eyes are framed by two black circles, with another black line bridging the two which runs across his nose. He also wears a simple double breasted black suit. He looks very different from a typical Zanpakuto spirit.

Despite his appearance, Giroshin seems often calm in every bit of his conversations with Mugen. In Mugen's thoughts and dreams Giroshin is seen playing a piano as he speaks to Mugen, giving him sort of a creepy feel to him. Giroshin sometimes commands Mugen, but never often.

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

Giroshin, in his unreleased state, takes the form of a typical katana. The weapon is black at the hilt and has a normal square pummel. There's a large black stripe that seems to go through the middle of the blade.

Shikai Release phrase::

"Execute, Giroshin..."

Shikai Appearance::

While in the Shikai state, Giroshin takes the form of a large dark head cleaver. The blade has a large hole in it for appearance while a round half circle is cut at the bottom for removing heads from his enemies. The blade appears to be almost as tall as Mugen is.

It must also be noted that the blade has a deathly feel to it, which is different from not only Mugen's additude, but his taste. He feels that his Shikai is sometimes to dangerous for him to handle.

Shikai Abilities::

Kirigakure - After releasing his Shikai, Mugen's spiritual energy increases exponentially. So much that the spiritual pressure around him can easily bring a low-leveled shinigami to his knees just by being around him.

Using this ability allows Mugen to manifest his great spiritual pressure into a spiritual mist that surrounds Mugen and his foes, but only under a fourth of a mile radius. This ability allows Mugen to be unseen, and with the great spiritual pressure still pressing on foes it can also allow him to go unheard by all senses.

Hahonryū - With a slash of Mugen's blade, he is able to release projectile energy attacks that hold a light blue color. These attacks range from different damage types depending on how much strength Mugen puts into it.

Bankai Description:

Once Mugen unlocks his bankai, his clothes begin to change all together. His suit is removed and his old shinigami uniform takes its place. Although his top is much different this time around. His top looks much to that of a blazer with a long bottom and a hood that fits over his head. Think of Ichigo's bankai, but with a hood connected to it, with a white inside instead of a red.

Mugen's spiritual energy and pressure is almost at its greatest height at this level.

Bankai Abilities:

Suishū Gorugon - Along with Mugen's transformation to Bankai, his spiritual energy increases with great intensity, making the spiritual pressure around him press hard on the ones around him. This time it manifests its self into spiritual rain pouring down around Mugen in a mile radius.

The rain pours at a constant rate and only stops once Mugen falls too weak or goes unconscious. As the rain hits foes and opponents it constantly eats away at their spiritual energy for every rain drop. The damage isn't much at all, but after a while it can become very tedious.

Sero Hahonryū - A greater, more powerful version of Hahonryū, but slightly different. Instead of slashing to launch projectile attacks, Mugen lifts up his blade and spawns an attack made of pure spiritual energy, that appears to be an enlarged hollow's face. The attack is shot off like a bullet and causes a great amount of damage.

This attack may only be used once or twice during bankai because of the energy that is used to do it.

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

Mugen's was born into a normal life with a loving mother and father. He grew up taking care of himself most of the time and helping out the family the best he could. As he began to grow older he noticed he had an ability that others did not. He could see ghosts and hollows while others couldn't. He made many friends this way with several different pluses.

During a raid on his village, he was trapped within his home with his family as it began to burn down. He died inside but his body stayed tied to the earth by the chain of fate. The rest of his family went to the Soul Society as his chain began to eat away.

Eventually the transformation to a Hollow would begin. Due to his vast amount of spiritual energy as a human, his body refused the change and began to transform out of sequence. His mask formed around his entire skull and stretched down to his chest. At that moment a nearby shinigami appeared, sensing the energy, and cut the mask in half. He would then send Mugen to the Soul Society.

Finding his home in this new world, Mugen realized that he had a higher spiritual energy than many others. He decided that he would enroll to become a Shinigami.

He excelled in all of his classes and joined the several ranks of the Gotei 13. His life had become great and now and he was very well known.

During a mission that sent him and some con rads to Hueco Mundo his Hollowification appeared once more. During a battle with several menos that tore his partners apart, Mugen's mask appeared on his face turning his personality into a beserk mode. He destroyed the menos in the area and he returned to himself after removing the mask. Since he was oblivious to what had just happened he thought that he was the one to blame for his friends dying on the battlefield.

He removed himself from the Soul Society entirely and found himself a Gigai. Ever since he left the Soul Society has considered him a criminal and he's wanted for execution. He operates usually for himself alone but he's currently looking for a place to settle down.

RP Sample:

Mugen's body laid back against the wall as he waited for something amazing to happen. He had done nothing at all today besides walk around the park in town. He felt unproductive, but he did too also enjoy the quiet time to himself.

"Hmm, what to do, what to do..." Mugen's eyes remained shut as he talked to himself. His body stayed relaxed as his right hand scratched the top of his scalp. Suddenly his eyes quickly opened. Mugen sensed something nearby, something stronger than the typical shinigami he was used to fighting.

"Let's check it out!" Mugen seemed to almost launch from the brick wall and began running down the ally. He finally began to make out the spiritual energy. It was no other than a Menos type Hollow...

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[Rebel Raven]

Hello, I'll be reviewing your application.

Personality could use more detail.

Appearance certainly NEEDS more details.

Sonido isn't necessary. Shunpo can be accessed just fine.

Irrompible - An ability only keen to that of Mugen Saito. This ability is similar to that of Hierro, except for a few differences. When Mugen uses this ability, an irregular shapped layer of white skin appears anywhere on the body that Mugen Saito feels. The skin looks as if its made of the same ingredients of a Hollow Mask, but can only stretch out to a twelve inch radius. The white material or skin is made of condensed spiritual energy which makes it similar to that of the Hierro.

What makes this so different from Hierro is the fact that Mugen is capable of creating weapons, such as spikes, swords and other piercing weapons by will. The weapons, or objects will be expressed through the white layer of skin. They can be broken off and used in battle like typical weapons and can very durable. It gets easier and easier to create different weapons as Mugen achieves more and more Hollow stages.

Is gunna need summore details. How many of these can he make? How often? Does it break apart as his Vizard mask does? Does it augment his Vizard Mask's time (A little Hint, no it doesn't!)? Basically those questions, and other details you can think of would be appreciated.

Also, I'm going to need details, and limitations on the weapons this can make.

What do you mean by "Hollow Stages"?

Giroshin, in his unreleased state, takes the form of a typical katana. The weapon is black at the hilt and has a normal square pummel. There's a large black stripe that seems to go through the middle of the blade.

I'm gunna need measurements.

While in the Shikai state, Giroshin takes the form of a large dark head cleaver. The blade has a large hole in it for appearance while a round half circle is cut at the bottom for removing heads from his enemies. The blade appears to be almost as tall as Mugen is.

It must also be noted that the blade has a deathly feel to it, which is different from not only Mugen's additude, but his taste. He feels that his Shikai is sometimes to dangerous for him to handle.

Gunna need measurements, especially coz you NEVER tell how tall Mugen is!

Kirigakure - After releasing his Shikai, Mugen's spiritual energy increases exponentially. So much that the spiritual pressure around him can easily bring a low-leveled shinigami to his knees just by being around him.

Using this ability allows Mugen to manifest his great spiritual pressure into a spiritual mist that surrounds Mugen and his foes, but only under a fourth of a mile radius. This ability allows Mugen to be unseen, and with the great spiritual pressure still pressing on foes it can also allow him to go unheard by all senses.

Godmodey. No.

Hahonryû - With a slash of Mugen's blade, he is able to release projectile energy attacks that hold a light blue color. These attacks range from different damage types depending on how much strength Mugen puts into it.

We're going to need details here. This may count as several abilities depending on certain details.

Suishû Gorugon - Along with Mugen's transformation to Bankai, his spiritual energy increases with great intensity, making the spiritual pressure around him press hard on the ones around him. This time it manifests its self into spiritual rain pouring down around Mugen in a mile radius.

The rain pours at a constant rate and only stops once Mugen falls too weak or goes unconscious. As the rain hits foes and opponents it constantly eats away at their spiritual energy for every rain drop. The damage isn't much at all, but after a while it can become very tedious.

Godmodey, no.

Sero Hahonryû - A greater, more powerful version of Hahonryû, but slightly different. Instead of slashing to launch projectile attacks, Mugen lifts up his blade and spawns an attack made of pure spiritual energy, that appears to be an enlarged hollow's face. The attack is shot off like a bullet and causes a great amount of damage.

This attack may only be used once or twice during bankai because of the energy that is used to do it.

Gunna need measurements, range, etc. much like the lesser version.

Eventually the transformation to a Hollow would begin. Due to his vast amount of spiritual energy as a human, his body refused the change and began to transform out of sequence. His mask formed around his entire skull and stretched down to his chest. At that moment a nearby shinigami appeared, sensing the energy, and cut the mask in half. He would then send Mugen to the Soul Society.

This is iffy. I'd get rid of this bit of what seems to be ego stroking in that his vast spiritual energy preventied him from becoming a demi-hollow.

He removed himself from the Soul Society entirely and found himself a Gigai. Ever since he left the Soul Society has considered him a criminal and he's wanted for execution. He operates usually for himself alone but he's currently looking for a place to settle down.

If you truly insist on this, then youll be facing the consequences of being a criminal wanted for execution. I.E. if spotted, if troublesome enough, shinigami -assuredly- more powerful than he may appear, and execute him.

[Shinigami Kyra]

Personality: Seems... awfully familiar... somehow. *checks archives* Ah; that's why. Anyhow, a bit more on his personality; likes, dislikes, what pisses him off, his views on Soul Society and Arrancar, and exactly what side he's on (if any).

Hollow Mask: Far too similar to Ichigo's Fully Hollowfied form. Change all aspects of this section.

Hollow Powers: Irrompible - Power denied. Too vague and inconsistent. I can see this power being abused in a number of ways. Either create some sort of limitation, or stick to the normal abilities of Hollows.

Shikai Abilities: Kirigakure - More of a limitation; mist would be allowed, but the heavy amount of reiatsu to bring Shinigami and the like to their knees, as well as deafening sound? Too much collaborated into one ability without any sort of limitation. From my point of view, he can cast this ability endlessly to have a constant one up advantage.

Bankai Description: Try not to make reference to other Canon appearances; simply describe your own appearance. Also; try to not make it look like Ichigo's, as you have already attempted to take his mask (and a bit of his own projectile attack), and now you're attempting to appear like his own Bankai appearance. Physical alterations should be heavily limited, as the ONLY physical change anyone ever goes under is Toshiro with the ice armor, and Renji with the baboon skin. Ichigo's clothes change slightly, but we're very hesitant on heavy clothing or official physical alterations for Bankai. Physical alterations are for Arrancar.

Bankai Abilities: Suishū Gorugon - Again, not approved. Same reason as above, only this time, far too powerful or easy to be manipulated/abused/Godmoded with.

History: AGAIN, too much of a connection to Ichigo's transformation. Con rads? I think you mean Comrades... you're far too vague in your history, simply putting in various pieces to suit your own needs instead of writing an actual history for your character. You don't explain how he acquired Shikai or Bankai (by the looks of it, you will not be getting approval for it), or anything like that.

Sample Post: No personality really explained here. Just the normal, walk around, talk, and lead up to a fight. I wouldn't have been surprised if you had initiated the fight, killed the Menos with little effort, and ended the post there. Please refer to the FAQ Guide section for more details on what a sample post should inquire.

Overall: Remove all Ichigo-like aspects. Thus far, I should have denied this application right off the bat due to the ridiculous amounts of similarities to Ichigo. Vast spiritual pressure, similar projectile blasts, and identacle Hollow Mask, as well as the fashion in which he became a Shinigami? Absolutely not. I doubt a Shinigami seeing the process would 'cut the mask' then send him so Soul Society. I think he would think that the soul was being turned into a Hollow and kill him right then and there.

[Shinigami Kyra]

Moved to archives due to inactivity.