Takeshi and Kin

[takeshi]

Name: Name: Takeshi TamotsuNickname: Tak Pet's name: Kin
Age: 16 or 160
Gender: Male
Personality:

Tak is always making jokes no mater what situation. No matter who it is he will make fun of them if he has the chance. He will make fun of you if you; mess up, do something stupid, say something stupid, or just because he can. He doesn't make fun of you because he doesn't like you or because he is unsure of himself...he just does it to be annoying. (plus that's what he knows how to do.) He hates riddles though and will hit you in the head if you ask him one....and then make a joke about it. In conclusion he is just a guy who likes to have fun and make people laugh even if it hurts some one else.

Appearance:

Takeshi weighs 162 lbs. And is 5' 7”. He has brown hair that goes down to his neck and sky blue eyes. He often has his hair in a ponytail under his black straw fedora.

He wears the usual black and white soul reaper uniform with a little touch of his own. Because of his Shikai his right sleeve comes off. He used to sew it back on every time, but that got annoying so he leaves the sleeve off.

He has a pet squirrel named “Kin” (Gold) because of his golden-brown fur coat. (He looks something like this)

Zanpakuto Spirit:

Zanpakuto Name: Shi-rudo ude Tsume (Shield Arm Claw)

Zanpakuto Spirit: His Zanpakuto spirit isn't a thing that looks like it would be an animal or a human. It is a metal ball that floats (when it is in it's true form). It can change it's shape and size to look like what ever it wants (mostly what ever makes Takeshi feel protected).

Inner world: Takeshi's inner world looks like the background for those “I'm a a mac and I'm a PC” commercials. It can however change the same way the spirit changes.

Sealed Zanpakuto:

Sealed Zanpakuto: When his Zanpakuto is sealed it looks like a regular Zanpakuto nothing fancy, nothing interesting. Just a black handle with a black sheath.

Shikai Description:

It looks like a giant armor arm with blades on the elbow and coming out of the shoulder. The hand has four fingers all with blades at the end. Tak's Shikai cannot come off his arm unless it turns back to it's sealed zanpakuto form.

Shikai Abilities:

The hand of the Shikai can release to be a chain and ball

Bankai Description:

N/A

Bankai Abilities:

N/A

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

Mamuro Tamostu was the father of Takeshi, his mother was from the land of the living. When his father came to the living wold on a mission, during that time he fell in love with a woman with high spiritual energy named Aimi. A month past when Aimi found out she was pregnant with a boy (Takishi). Mamuro knew he was going to be taken back to the soul society and be punished so he quickly hid Aimi in a place no one would find her and let the soul reapers take him. Months past and Takeshi was born. He lived 5 years in the human world before coming across a squirrel...a dead one. His spiritual energy was high so he could see the squirrel. He named it “Kin” because of it's golden brown fur. A year past and he was sent to the Soul Society. (Kin followed him there) and he became a soul reaper.

RP Sample:

It was midnight every one else was asleep except Takeshi. He has been up all night teaching Kin how to jump through a hoop of fire.
"YES!!!!!!!!!!"
Takeshi screamed at the top of his lungs when Kin finally succeeded. He woke up everyone in a 5 room radius and then quickly turned off the light, stoppled the fire and jumped into his bed acting like he was asleep. Some one opened his door and looked inside they left.
"yes."
Takeshi said under his breath and then quickly fell asleep.
(Sorry for the short RP sample never did one of these before. Trust me my post are better then this)

[Shinigami Kyra]

Huh...

First off, I would like for you to know that 16 years old, in Shinigami terms, is quite a very young age. So young, in fact, that I doubt he would have even manifested his spiritual energy enough to even be considered a possibility for Shinigami Academy, let alone someone who has already obtained Shikai. I'll give ya a free-bee and toss this at ya: 1 Human Aged Year = 10 Shinigami Years, i.e., someone who 'looks' 16 is probably around 160 or so. Rukia's estimated to be around 150 or so, and she looks about 15, 16 years of age.

I'd add a bit more to personality, and appearance... but before I go into more detail, I'd like to point out the forum's main Guide and FAQ, located as an announcement in every subforum. It's a standard rule for new applicants to read over the entirety of the Guide, as well as understand the standards we have in our players.

There is also a section dedicated to, not only each part of the application in accordance to Race, but also a good section dedicated to the Sample Post.

I suggest reading that over heavily, as well as the Craft of Writing section.

From there, make any editing you feel is necessary, then post a reply when, and only when, you have finished with your editing, as it will announce to us that your application will need a full review.

Also; please remove the Bankai aspect; simply type in N/A for the Bankai Section.

[takeshi]

I just edited it...slightly. I couldn't really modify the appearance or personality. I did take out the Bankai stuff. I also am not good at RP samples...so I was hoping you could just see how I RP regularly.

Thanks

[Shinigami Kyra]

I'm sorry, but if you do not follow the standards of the board, there's no way I can accept this application. If you cannot meet the standards of a properly acceptable application, then I'm sorry to say that I will have to deny your application. Please either edit the above mentioned and post a reply when you have done so, or post a reply stating that you are unable to do so.

[takeshi]

I just edited it once more.

[Shinigami Kyra]

Application Denied.

Please read the Shinigami Applications thread and the Sample Post thread for more information on the standards of the board.