Akira Michiyo [Done] [Vizard]

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Name: Akira Michiyo
Age: 171 [Looks 17]
Gender: Male
Personality:

Akira Michiyo is cold-hearted, intelligent, and analytical. Akira is a so called ,"Rule-Breaker", and likes to break rules. He is very popular between the Vizards, but the truth is that the popularness is just a distraction to analyze everything without being a suspect. Akira Michiyo likes to create a quick strategy before he makes his move. Akira's true desire is unknown, but to fulfill his unknown desire, he needs to become the Captain of the Technical Bureau (12th Squad) even though he is a Vizard. Akira LOVES violence, fighting, and blood.

Akira likes technical things and almost does everything in his laptop. Akira has a lot of friends and acts cold-hearted around them.

Theme Song: Goodbye By SR-71

Appearance:

Height: 5'4"
Weight: 121
Hair Length/Style/Color: To Shoulder/Straight/Glowing Dark-Blue
Eye Color: Yellow

Akira is strange Vizard. He also tricks people into thinking that he is not special or smart. Akira has soft skin and has an average muscle build. Since Akira is a "technical" person, he always carries a dark-blue laptop with him.

Akira wears a black coat with a white shirt under and black pants. He also wears black gloves.

Like I said before, Akira prefers to trick people. He wears high-tech
black glasses, but they appear to be normal looking. People think those are just normal glasses, but the truth is that Akira's glasses can scan a person and find a profile on them. Akira also wears a necklace with a white cross. People think it is just a normal necklace, but it is really a USB device.

Akira's Zanpakuto is positioned diagonal against his back.

i.imgur.com/RO93T.jpg [Appearance]

Hollow Mask:

Akira's hollow mask is pure white. The eyes of the mask will be pitch black with a blue glowing eye. There is a big line going trough the middle of the mask going up to down. On both upper sides of the mask, there is one line connecting to the exact middle of the mask. Below both of the lines, there will be a pair of eyes and remember there will be that line going through the middle separating them. The teeth of this hollow mask are pretty big.

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[Hollow Mask]

Hollow Powers:

Point Black Cero - This Cero is probabaly the strongest Cero and can almost kill your opponent. One major weakness about this Cero is that this Cero can only be activated when you put your hand on your opponent's body. Another major weakness is that this Cero can be easily dodged. All you have to move of the hand of person shooting the Cero in a different direction. Another weakness is that it can only be shot from the hand.(Roughly requires 25 % of mask reiatsu, and 10 % of Akira's reiatsu)

Mask Shield: This ability allows the Vizard to fight in a berserk state that allows them to not feel the pain of injuries.
(Roughly requires 55 % mask reiatsu, and 75 % of Akira's reiatsu)

Inner Hollow:

Akira's Inner Hollow's name is Suzaku. Akira's Inner Hollow is the complete opposite of him. Akira's Inner Hollow is loud and hyper. Akira's Inner Hollow might seem very devilish, but once you get to know him nicer than anything. Akira's Inner Hollow represents Akira's good thoughts. Akira has control over his Inner Hollow since his Inner Hollow is very kind. Akira's Inner Hollow is very protective of him even though Akira seems like a bully to his Inner Hollow. Akira and his share a deep bond. Somewhat even Akira cares for his Inner Hollow.

Akira's Inner Hollow has soft skin and has an average muscle build. Akira always carries a light-gray laptop with him. Akira's Inner Hollow wears a white coat with a black shirt under and white pants. he also wears white gloves. Akira's Inner Hollow wears white high-tech glasses. Akira's Inner Hollow wears a necklace with a black cross. Akira's Inner Hollow's Zanpakuto is positioned the opposite direction of Akira's Zanpakuto against his back.

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[Inner Hollow]

Zampakuto's name:

Saisyuu Hakai (Final Destruction)

Zampakuto Spirit:

Akira's Zanpakuto Spirit is a very interesting Zanpakuto Spirit. Akira's Zanpakuto is Electricity Type and Projectile Type Zanpakuto. It is also somewhat Technology-based because of it's Spirit Pressure Appearance.

Saisyuu Hakai is a male. He has dark-blue hair with some white hair as well. Saisyuu Hakai wears a dark-blue coat with a SMALL black shirt under. Because he wears SMALL black shirt, his belly button part shows. Saisyuu Hakai has yellow eyes just like Akira. Saisyuu Hakai wears silver earrings. Saisyuu Hakai even has dark-blue wings which make him fly.

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[Zanpakuto Spirit]

Saisyuu Hakai personality is a very protective type. He always warns Akira if he thinks something bad is going to happen. Another thing about Saisyuu Hakai is that Saisyuu Hakai can form a ball of reiatsu and can tell the future.
Akira never listens to Saisyuu Hakai even though Saisyuu Hakai is always right.

Akira's Zanpakuto Spirit Inner World is in Space with a Black Hole nearby. Everytime Akira goes into his Inner World, he has to try not to get sucked in by the black hole.

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[Inner World]

When Akira releases all of his Spirit Pressure, his Spirit Pressure Appearance looks like the Apple Company Symbol because Akira's Zanpakuto is somewhat a Technology Zanpakuto and Akira is technical person.

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[Spirit Energy Appearance]

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

Sasiyuu Hakai in its un-released Zanpakuto form is a 60 cm katana. It has an Aqua blade. Its sheath is blue with a blue string attached to it. The katana's hilt is blue. The thing connecting the blade and the hilt is an Aqua S.

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[Un-released Zanpakuto Appearance]

Shikai Release phrase::

Destroy All Mater Around You, Saisyuu Hakai!

To release Saisyuu Hakai, you have to stick out one of the arms to your side with Saisyuu Hakai and close your eyes. Then you have to say "Destroy..." and open your eyes. Then say "All Matter Around You...". Then Saisyuu Hakai will start to fly around your hand and will continue flying with being activated. After the blade of Saisyuu Hakai shatters, Saisyuu Hakai's hilt will automatically come to your hand.

Shikai Appearance::

Saisyuu Hakai in it's Shikai doesn't really have an appearance. This is because Saisyuu Hakai is a Projectile Zanpakuto Type. This means that when Saisyuu Hakai is realeased, Saisyuu Hakai seperates into air based blades that Akira can control freely. The air bases blades that Saisyuu Hakai turns into are smalls pieces of flying visible electricity. The pieces of flying visible electricity can't cut anybody but can send small electricity currents and can disturb the nerve system.

Shikai Abilities::

Nucleus - Nucleus is the ability of sending electricity shock waves with the swing of Saisyuu Hakai's hilt. The electricity shock waves can not do much damage, but at the touch of the shock wave the opponent will be blasted away. This is good to make space from your opponent and you. (Roughly requires 5 % of Zanpakuto reiatsu, and 2 % of Akira's reiatsu)

Magneto - Magneto is the ability of bringing objects the size of 1000 pounds or less to you. To do this, you have to put two fingers on the hilt of your Zanpakuto and scratch it. Now all objects can come to the hand you scratched your Zanpakuto with your mind. You cannot throw the objects with this power. Only make then come close to you. This ability is good for close combat. (Roughly requires 5-25 % of Zanpakuto reiatsu depending on the weight of the object, and 2-10 % of Akira's reiatsu depending on the distance of the object)

Bankai Description:

N/A

Bankai Abilities:

N/A

Skill Level: Kidou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

Akira was born in Saint Waynes Hospital. He was an orphan to begin with. He had to live on the streets. He was like a thief and tried stealing whatever he saw because he was so poor. For him, days were rough. There were even days when he had to starve.

Because of his stealing habit, people cussed him and even threw rocks at him. Some people went even farther and beat him up hard.
Then on the last day of his life, he saw a skate board lying around. The first thought that came in his mind was to steal it. Just when he was about to take the skate board, he saw a meteor coming.

He took the skate board and ran. When he finally realized he won't make it, he just stopped. He died his last thought thinking "I will make all those suffer who made me suffer". The meteor had burned his body alive and crushed him and he died.

All of a sudden he woke up. To a surprise he didn't die. Well, that's what Akira thought. When he realized he became a death god, he saw Charon. Akira thought Charon was someone who could help him. Charon trained him making him think that Charon was not a bad person. But then... he found out he was to late.

He found out that Charon was going to use him as a hollowfication experiment. When he was sleeping, Charon used him. Charon had failed and poor Akira was left there on the floor. Then he was lucky that Nix had come.

Nix saved Akira using the technique he made. Nix then trained him. Nix told him that he was a Vizard. Nix told Akira to join the other Vizards. Nix said that his life would be better there. And it was.

The Vizards told Akira to enroll at the Soul Society. He sent an application and it still waiting for a response. Then one day a hellish desire came into Akira's mind and has been trying to fulfill that desire until now. Now he only wants violence, fighting, and blood. And Akira grew this way and became 17.

RP Sample:

Saisyuu Hakai: ...The path you have chosen is the wrong path. It will make you suffer the most pain ever.

Akira: Would you stop trying to warn me about my future! I'm getting tired of it.

Suzaku: You know...You should trust him. After all he is your Zanpakuto.

Akira: Shut up! Who told you to talk! You two make me wonder why I even came in my Inner World. Oh ya...That reminds me. I have to go my squad now. I have a squad meeting. I'm leaving, see ya.

Suzaku: Now that he's gone, wanna play a game of chess.

Saisyuu Hakai: Sure...

Akira: Man, these two will never let me rest in peace...

Sync: Stop right there, there's a lot of talk about you. If your that good as I hear you are, then accept my challenge to a fight.

Akira's glasses scans Sync. The glasses shows Sync's profile to Akira.

Glasses: Sync...Sync is a random member of the Soul Society. He loves blood gore and likes to take on strong people. Back when he was a human, he was living on the streets and was treated like a hobo. People threw rocks at him and made him suffer. One day, the humans went to far and started chasing him, Sync tried running to the street across him and died by an accidental car accident. He died with thought of "One day...I will be the one who will kill them all". He was surprised to not be dead and finally figured that he was a death god. He gradually made his ranks up. He started with the desire of being powerful, but now desires nothing more than violence.

Akira: So you want me to fight a person who has been living on the streets when he was a human! Pathetic! "Hehe" chucked Akira.

Sync: You know about my past...How would you know when I don't even know. Now your done for it.

Sync didn't even release his Shikai and went straight to Bankai.

Akira: Well now I think my training for today is done! shouted Akira.

Akira was about to release his hollow mask and then he heard a voice in his head.

You must not release me! It was Suzaku's. If you do, your secret of me will be exposed.

Akira: That's if he survives he told Suzaku.

Akira then released his Hollow Mask.

Sync was so surprised that he just stopped and it looked like he was paralyzed. Akira used shunpou and was behind Synz already. He wasn't even worthy of a Warm-Up murmured Akira. Then Sync fell down with blood all over his body.

Akira: Well, I better get going or I'll be late...

[Shinigami Kyra]

Ah, thank you for informing me that your application is done. The staff certainly do not hold the ability to comprehend when an application has been complete, and we strongly urge members to continue PMing us, as well as privately chatting within the Xat Box to inform us that your application is complete and is awaiting review.

First of all, applications are reviewed in the order they are completed. Since you JUST FINISHED YOUR APPLICATION, there should have been no reason for you to feel the impatience of contacting not one, but BOTH staff members in order to inform us that your application has been completed. Some people have been waiting for more than five days for a response.

As such, I wanted to first put this application on Hold for Seven Days, i.e., it would not be reviewed for seven days, as punishment of not only disobeying the rules of the site, which you obviously have not read skimming through your application, but also for your utter lack of patience.

Instead, however, I will give you the review you so eagerly wanted.

Personality: Too vague. No actual flaws... what you've produced is the perfect persona. Someone who's quick thinking, cold hearted, analytical, who uses his 'supposed popularity' in order to analyze things without being a suspect? What is he analyzing, and who would suspect him of what crime? I doubt the whole 'popularity' thing will fly with other known Vizards. First of all, you're suddenly putting pressure on all Vizard characters and players, indicating that they must now 'understand that your character is popular.' That's not going to fly, so remove it. This should be told through an 'all knowing,' or omni-view point. I.e., what IS his ultimate goal? Don't state 'it's unknown.' No, we want to know. Why does he 'need' to become Captain of Division 12?

Appearance: No list; it says so in the Guides.

Akira is strange Vizard. He also tricks people into thinking that he is not special or smart...Like I said before, Akira prefers to trick people.

Should be listed in personality... and that's just another flawless aspect to add to the others now.

Not too sure on the whole 'scanner' glasses deal... I mean, is this just for humans? Is it some sort of micro-computer device? Where do the resources come from? Does he steal information from Soul Society to get these so called 'profiles?' Does he google people? What?

Hollow Powers: Vizards don't get their own personal version of a Cero, they get the standard one. As such, I think you mean 'Point Blank Cero,' otherwise, you're attempting to also create a black colored Cero... and that's certainly a no.

Zanpakuto Spirit: Um... Apple? Really? You're really going to have the 'aura of Apple?'

Shikai Release Phrase: I suggest reading the Guide about Zanpakuto Release Phrases that are longer than two to three words.

Shikai Appearance: Um... how many of these 'blades' suddenly appear around him? Are they identical in appearance?

Shikai Abilities: Magneto seems far too... controlling, i.e., could you pull a Shinigami toward you, who weighed 97 lbs? How could they fight against it, or could they even do so? Can you yank someone's Zanpakuto from their hands and into your own? Seems like the ultimate disarming technique. Basically, it just seems like telekinesis... just a 'toward you' version. As such, it's a creatively locked power. Refer to the Powers Guide for more information.

History: Death by meteor? I don't even know what to say to something like that...

Aizen? No; remove all aspects. There's parts about this listed in the History section of the Guide. I suggest reading it over, since it's apart of the rules. Obviously, you have no read any of the rules, since you've already broken so many of them.

Urahara now? No; no mentioning of Canon characters in your History, unless referenced only. You're including action, which is highly impolite to the players of those Canon characters. Think of it from this point of view; you play Rukia Kuchiki. While the player of Ichigo knows that Ichigo and Rukia have a background, how would you feel of someone suddenly created a character who was friends with Rukia before she joined Soul Society? Now, you have to suddenly acknowledge this player's character as though they're best friends, without any permission granted to you.

Not fair, is it? Remove all canon aspects.

It's very rare for Vizards to be instantly welcomed into Soul Society, though through the board's own story progress, it has been slightly overlooked, i.e., 'We do not agree with the Vizards point of views, however, we both have an understanding that any thread to one is a thread to another.''

What's this 'desire?' again, too vague.

RP Sample: Denied. Does not follow proper formatting of Freeform Role Playing. Read the 'Craft of Writing section' as well as the Sample Post Guide.

Overall: This application is very closely, boarder-lining Denial/Unacceptable.

Edit: Oh, I see you removed the Aizen and Urahara aspects... now you just made it seem far too convenient that your character has not only 'suddenly become' a shinigami, but now a Vizard out of ... what now?

Also forgot to mention this in History. First of all, when people die, they don't just suddenly become Shinigami, they become souls first. They must be brought to Soul Society... then, they must go through the Shinigami Academy...

Otherwise, he wouldn't even know anything about his Zanpakuto or how to use it... he would have NO Kido ability, as that is learned in Shinigami Academy. Unless these supposed 'Vizards' who he's 'popular' with trained him.

That's a 'no' on that part.