a Dark hollow

[vainious]

Name: Vainious
Age: 148
Gender: Male
Personality:

Vainious, despite being a hollow, is not truly evil. He does feed off humans but mostly wicked ones, he tends to kill most hollows he finds. He isn't hostile towards soul reapers, well most of the time, though most do try to attack him, he will ether defend himself but try not to harm them, or will simply try to block their attacks.
He is very loyal, his loyalty is actually what made him a hollow. He tends to be kind, but get on his bad side and you'll find him to be rather cruel. he seems calm and collected most of the time, if not slightly cold. Just because he isn't evil doesn't mean he's a goody goody 2 shoes, he tends to be dark even when being kind (ex: if he was saying congratulations for a new baby he may say something like "Great....another future hollow for me to kill later"). Another Odd fact, he often states he wishes he was a Shinigami instead of a hollow, and often says given the chance he would if there was a way. He's not exactly kind to humans, never truly was, but he is more hostile towards other hollows then himself.

Appearance:

Arrancar Powers:

Natural Arrancar Powers:

Black hell gate: he is able to create a gate made of his own energy which creates a vortex that will suck things into it.

Void Claw:He can use his claws to send out blasts of what appear to be blade shaped energy, but is actually the absence of energy, it has around the same effect as a energy blast would but will cause energy to actually be ripped from the target causing damage from within rather then causing it from the outside

Zanpakuto's name:

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Un-released Zanpakuto's Appearance:

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Resurrección Release phrase::

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Resurrección Appearance::

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Resurrección Abilities::

Skill Level: Kidou: Advanced
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Intermediate
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

Vainious lived a normal life, well for the most part. His family had a sword that was passed down from generation to generation, as well as each generation being trained to fight with swords, little did any of them know the truth behind this sword. Vainious was the last of his family, dieing at the age of 17, his parents had died 2 years earlier and there were no other family members, he had sworn to his father on his death bed to always protect the sword, and till this very day he is doing just that.

He was a normal mindless hollow for a long time, but eventually began to eat other hollows, and was eventually eaten by a Gillian, but eventually took it over, and now has become a Adjuchas.

Back to the sword, he doesn't know this fact, but the sword is actually a ancient Zanpakuto, one of his ancestors was a soul reaper who died while fighting a hollow, the soul reaper's sister then took the sword and thus it began to be passed down. It is encased in stone, making it seem to be just a simple katana made of stone, it's name is actually the last name of Vainious's family, which is the only thing he can't recall from his human life. He lets very few people touch the sword, very, very few. The sword rest in the ruins of his old home, which was a temple.

RP Sample:

Vainious watched as humans went about their daily lives, he was hidden well. None of them ever came near the temple so he didn't see humans often. Hollows however seemed to flock to the place as if there were thousands of souls there a day, vainious left from time to time because he got tried of hunting all the time. On the days he left he would simply sit and watch human life, missing it, and realizing just why he killed hollows instead of humans. The turth was he missed being human, missed how simple life had been, and since hollows end lives killing them helped preserve it, even if he wouldn't admit it.

He hated his kind, well not hated he had to feed off them to feel his void and stay in control. He began to head back to the temple and saw a hollow heading for the same place, he ran after it and leaped on to it's back, he stabbed his claws into the back of it's head and ripped the head, and mask, apart, and devoured it's pieces then he kept moving. once he arrived he killed and devoured hollows till here reached the sword, most were smart enough not to go near here. Most hollows seemed to fear the sword, much to Vainious's dismay, while he would not risk harming the sword by using it he liked how they left it alone.

Soul reapers came on occasion, most were attracted by the high concentration of hollows, others were just passing through the area, most would attack him, others that had attacked him before would just leave him alone. There were a few that would talk to him, but not many. He consider a few, maybe 4 or 5, to be his friends, and on occasion if 1 of those 4 or 5 asked to see the sword he would let them. It was a lonely life, well after life, but Vainious enjoyed it some what...well kinda...ok it sucked, but he was use to it...not really.

[kenpachi]

Hey, name's Kamair and I'll be reviewing your application today.

Wellll... a good-spirited Hollow. Keep in mind that before Hollow become Arrancar/Adjuchas, they don't really have a conscience. They listen only to their hunger, which is why they hunt anyone they can find.

Unless this is an adjuchas, then he cannot be good-willed. A Hollow that is good to mankind in general is just odd beyond belief.

Also, I can't allow Hollow Bane, as it continues to increase the strength of your character.

Once you have made the requested changes, please post here again to receive another review.

[vainious]

updated

if there is anything else i need to change just let me know

[kenpachi]

Did he become an Adjuchas? I don't see it... so, my first post still stands.

[vainious]

sorry about that, edited it before but it didn't stay, no idea why. updated now though

[kenpachi]

Approved,

Medium Level, Weak.