((Arrancar))Gillron Hawkeye ((done))

[timtank]

Name: Gillron Hawkeye
Age: 899 years old
Gender: Male
Personality:

He is a cold arrancar. He was the same when he was a human. He loved to see others pain, it is one of the only things making him feel happy. Gillron fights for only him self and nobody else. He would not ever feel bad if he lost a friend because of something he did. He is always mad about something,and he loves his self way to much. He has a smart mouth and can be very disrespectful.

Appearance:

Gillron has black hair and a part of his mask is over his right eye and going down the back of the right side of his head. He is like 6 feet and 155 IB. His hole is right on his gut. He also wears the white robes all arrancars wear.

Arrancar Powers:

hawk kids-Gillron can make small clones of him self.The look like kids but they can do anything gillron can do.The hawk kids are smaller and weaker because they can only fight with 30% of gillron's power.

hollow wind-He can control the air around him. Making strong gust and blades of air.


bones of steel- his bones are like steel and can take bones from his bady and use them in battle. He can make swords,spears,battle axe,and mace. When He makes the sword he pulls a bone out of his body and it becomes a blade made of bones as hard as steel. When he makes the as his bones will grow to look like a axe. For the mace he makes a bone into a mace by taking the bone and it grows spikes on the bone. with this skill his skin is even harder.

Natural Arrancar Powers:

Cero (Zero)
Description are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from the mouth or hand. Only menos, arrancar, and Vizard have so far been shown to use cero attacks, and it appears that higher classes of hollow can use it more efficiently.

Hierro
Description refers to the ultra tough skin of the Arrancar; while very strong, it is by no means invincible.


Bala
Description is a weaker but quicker alternative to the regular cero attack. The technique hardens the user's spiritual pressure and fires it at around twenty times the speed of a cero blast.

Zampakuto's name:

Wenvell

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

It looks like any zanpakuto just with a white hilt.

Resurrección Release phrase::

fly wenvell.

Resurrección Appearance::

He gets 6 white wings and every wing has a small hole in it. His mask grows over his face showing only his mouth. His nose becomes like a birds beck. On the top of his head is a blade like horn made of bone. His body then gets bone like armmor all over. This armmor can protect from attacks. He even gets bone claws.((he kind ok starts looking like a big bird ))

Resurrección Abilities::

speed fly- he can fly at speeds almost as fast as a shunpo.


Maga wind-Gillron can control the air with this power. He can make powerful gust and vortexs. He can only use this power on days the wind is blowing. When he use it on other days the attack is very weak.







bone blade-Gillron can make his bones into something he can use in battle. much stronger then bones of steel, He can make swords, spears, battle axe, and mace. When He makes the sword he pulls a bone out of his body and it becomes a blade made of bones as hard as steel. When he makes the as his bones will grow to look like a axe. For the mace he makes a bone into a mace by taking the bone and it grows spikes on the bone.

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

when Gillron died he was eaten by a hollow. When he was just a hollow he was all white his skin like bone. He had powerful bone like wings with holes within. when he was a hollow all he did was feed on souls and soul reapers. He was a powerful and deadly hollow. Even when Gillron was human he could feel souls close by. All he did was feed on the souls of the died. He soon started feeding on his own kind to become more powerful.



Gillron would like to lead the arrancars someday. There was always something about him making him hope he can lead them someday. To do that he trained by killing and eating over 100 soul reapers.



He lives in the white desert in a small one room house in the sandyest parts of the white desert.he hunted many times before. He loved to hunt for souls, it makes him more powerful as he eats the souls.



He is in the world of the living more then he is in Hueco Mundo. He feels like Hueco Mundo is just a white dark hell. He spends most of his time in karakura town feeding on the souls there. He hoped he could soon become a espada.



After becoming espada he would like to take control of all Hueco Mundo, by becoming leader. He feels like Hueco Mundo need a leader who is ready to kill and of there enemys. Even when he was living he was cold hearted. He killed even human kids with low Spiritual Power . He seems to be fearless,his drive is to be the most powerful arrancar someday.To do thathe needs to become espada any way he can.

RP Sample:

As Gillron looks over karakura town he smiles as he sees a group of soul reaper kill a hollow. Gillron then flys to the ground and stands in back of the soul reapers. The soul reaper then looks at Gillron with the look of fear on there faces. one of them then yelled arrancar. What are you doing in this town? Gillron smiles and said what am I doing here, this is my town what about you. You must have come to let me kill you.

The soul reapers then draw there swords. Gillron smiles and sonidos in back of two soul reaper and attacks with high speed combos killing both of them.

Gillron then said who is next to die? A soul reaper then trys to stab him, But he sonidos and grabs the soul reapers arm and snaps the bone in his arm. Gillron then said to the soul reaper don't lose your head now hahahaha!!

Gillron then cuts the soul reapers hed clean off. He looks at the last two soul reapers.He said to them come and get me, he said with a smile on his face. One of them then shunpos at Gillron but at the same time Gillron sonidos at the soul reaper. As the soul reaper came at him he easily ran the soul reaper threw. As he killed the soul reaper the last one tryed to run away. Gillron said to him you will die like you friends hahahaha. Gillron shot the last soul reaper in the back with a cero killing him. Gillron then smiles and said that was a good workout for today. Gillron used Garganta to go back to hueco mundo.

[temple]

Several problems.

1. Gravity control. I don't understand how that fits with your character at all.

2.You already have an eye beam, and now you have another cero like attack? This doesn't seem to fit into any sort of theme.

3. Absorbing the souls of the dead and gaining a power boost is acceptable. But absorbing them and being able to do things you can't normally do is OP.

4. Your entire Resureccion fits no theme whatsoever. Not to mnetion it's OP. You have the gravity ability, and then a bunch of wind abilities. Where did the wind stuff come from, and why can he manipulate gravity too?

[timtank]

problems fixed

[temple]

You arrancar is still convoluted. You have telekenisis instead of gravity manipulation, some kind of bone weapons, and wind powers.

Pick a theme. Stick to it.

[timtank]

modifyed

[Shinigami Kyra]

No; you still have the eye beams. I suggest reading over the Applications FAQ on the Applications page. After reading it, make any edits you want. After that, I will be more than happy to give your application a full and proper review.

[timtank]

ok done

[Shinigami Kyra]

-_-

I'm just repeating what's already in the Applications FAQ

Space after punctuations.

You have 18 abilities total. That's a definite no. That's FAR too many abilities. Start cutting down in all three sections, especially Resurrección Abilities; 8 is FAR too much, most only have two or three.

[timtank]

fixed

[Shinigami Kyra]

Okay... so you knocked it down to fifteen. Alright; how about I give you a number?

9; three in natural, three in Arrancar abilities, and three in resurrecion.