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Post by Rebel Raven on Feb 1, 2010 21:13:14 GMT -5
Okay, I'm no longer here to talk science. I don't care.
I'm just here to make reviews on an application and help it get closer to approval, or, heaven forbid, deny it because it's a hopeless case.
And here we go.
... ... ... ... ... ... I'm not seeing weaknesses, or limitations on your abilities as per request aside from measurements and range.
Not on the superheated blade. Yeah, it's a passive ability, but there should still be some weakneses, and limitations.
For all I know your character can sustain "God's Focus" and basically elongate the sword, move about, and fight freely with a 30 meter lightsaber for lack of a better term.
Yeah, it's painfully obvious it takes reiatsu to sustain/use, but you say nothing of how much, how long the beam can be sustained once used, how often it can be used.
AGAIN, I don't like the fact that your character is protected by a superheated membrane and able to attack at the same time.
What's to stop him from using a binding kido on an opponent, and hitting them with the membrane, and damaging them? Or grabbing them, and pulling them into the membrane to fry?
Oh, I noticed it stops melee. No specefic melee, so I can only assume it stops ALL Melee which is not allowable.
As I see it you haven't, at all, changed anything save God's Focus despite my numerous problems with the rest of the powers.
I sure as heck haven't forgotten about the problems I have with your powers.
So, once more, I wanna see better limitations, and weaknesses for each and every power.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Feb 2, 2010 0:35:25 GMT -5
Basically this person blew it on the board, and in Xat.
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