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Post by dmass on Sept 9, 2009 19:37:24 GMT -5
it is a weakness and yes someone stronger will break some weaker will break it in one hit as well i told before his electric power are weak I thought i put that it would break in one hit in there.. as for the shape shifting the weakness is in the electricity and it uses eletricty so after awhile it will get sloppy and if i use electrical attacks it will get sloppy faster, when he exchanges blows with people he will lose electricity it is like he is growing tired but i will make sure to put that one hit thing in the profile.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Sept 9, 2009 19:50:12 GMT -5
You need to adjust your application to reflect the added weaknesses. It needs to list all the pros and cons of the abilities, and all details you tell me about that aren't already there.
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Post by dmass on Sept 9, 2009 20:36:10 GMT -5
Wait what that is already in the profile but i added more for his limitations just look at his arrancar powers and yes he is still slow now every time he moves he lose electricity good right Shape shifting no longer Perfect?
List? they were always in the arrancar power section when i explained the electrical power(added he can not create electricity) also it shows up in the release stretch explanation but you said earlier today that hiding it in lots of words and assumptions is not good
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Post by kenpachi on Sept 10, 2009 19:10:32 GMT -5
Hey, name's Kamair, and I'll be picking up your review from her on out.
I like how you have length in your application, you seem to have put some thought into it and I appreciate it. However, I have to ask something.
My one question is this...
Why wings?
I mean, I don't see it serving any sort of purpose really, so why?
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Post by dmass on Sept 11, 2009 12:25:20 GMT -5
It goes with the insect / flight / childhood dream thing..... his mask is a old school aviator goggles (like snoopy when he flies on the dog house and scarf) are wings a problem and most insects i see have wings
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Post by kenpachi on Sept 11, 2009 12:54:13 GMT -5
Since we have gone over the topic on xat... I must ask you to please make the specified changes and post here again when you would like to receive another review.
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Post by dmass on Sept 11, 2009 15:34:53 GMT -5
Oh mai ball you broke them Wings gone
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Post by kenpachi on Sept 11, 2009 16:28:24 GMT -5
Approved.
Medium Level, Average.
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