Shion Yayade [DENIED]

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Name: Shion Yayade
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Personality:

Shion is a cocky childish kid.He very often gets himself in situations too big for him to handle.He's under the intense impression that hes the greatest fighter,Although hes usually proved wrong.Aside from his love of girls his weakness lies in his inability to access situations and read people.He very often gets tricked by people.

Appearance:

Shion likes to dress in black and white which is perfect because thats the soul reaper clothing.He has 3 earrings 2 in his earlobes and 1 at the top.Shion has long purple hair,which he keeps tied up.The clothing you can see him in now is currently red.Showing him as a entry level male soulreaper.Shion stands 4 feet, and 120 pounds.His dark red eyes,look black except under certain light.

Zanpakuto Spirit:

Is a very sad female spirit.Shes incredibly depressing.But could she not it always rains in her world.Shes roughly 4'3.She has dark sad eyes.And constantly brings a umberela everywhere she goes.



Inner world
Her world is a place of constant rain.Tho the sun never shines in her world.Sometimes she is in a good mood and will dance, despite the heart throb of the clouds.Her world consists of many trees and lightposts as well.

Sealed Zanpakuto:

While just normal Take-Mikazuchi is a long blade.It looks like nothing more than a katanna.her blade is a pale blue.While her handle is a normal black colour.blade is 3 feet by 2 meteres width.

Shikai Description:

When Take-Michazuchi is released it starts by shaking the heavens.With a blinding light emminating from the sword, and through the clouds.The light contains intense heat that mixes with the clouds protective water base.Forcing the cloud to turn into a rain cloud.once this is complete Shion can control the cloud into doing his bidding.Making it rain on whatever shion decides on.
The release ritual involves saying this while letting your fall through the ground. it makes a splash while doing so."Rain Take mikazuchi!!"after the blade sinks.A new stronger blade appears on the side of Shion.It is a water blade, its blue and black.The blade becomes jagged as the structure and design take on a more arrora appearance.
Main Ability:Rain

Shikai Abilities:

1.Rain pressure:By sending pressure into the cloud the rain can temperaraly pick up, Increasing the pressure on the enemy or on the target to twice its original force.this can turn an annoying problem of being blinded from the water.To the water becoming a force strong enough to bruise.The increase of pressure lasts for 3 posts and puts shions spiritual pressure down, as this is what it takes to make the rain strong.

2.Controlling water placement:Even though the rain cannot be controled the placement of the cloud can.This gives shion the ability to virtually blind or inconvience his enemy.By masking ones presence or directing water into ones eye.This abiility can be used 3 turns to move clous into position.State your using its effect each time. while shion controlls the cloud placement.Shion cannot use the sword to protect or attack.

3.Spiritual concealment:While it rains Shion can use this effect to hide his spiritual presence, from attackers.This can work as long as the rain falls on enemy. this is made possible by cloud placement.While hiding one cannot use spiritual based attacks.

Bankai Description:

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Bankai Abilities:

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Skill Level: Kidou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

Shion began life in the Shiyi clan his mother, a shinigami of the unique stealth force. And his father a quincy of the land of the living.In a world full of hate between the two they somehow found love.The quincy and soulreaper hadnt always had there differences at one point, the two fought on the same ground they both lived for one dream to protect the innocent from there inpending doom.But there was one big difference in the way the two sides saw this should be met.The soulreapers sought peace and spiritual balance.With the zonpacto they would first cleanse the soul of the wrong they commited as a hollow before sending them to the soul society,The quincy didn't agree and thought of it as stupid to show such a coutesy to their attackers and instead thought to only destroy them.Thus throwing off the balance of the spirit world by sending too many souls strait to the underworld.The soulreapers told the quincy many times of what their actions would result in.But sadly to no avail and so a war was declared. Shion was born on a very dark day, where his mothers sister was ordered to kill his father.In the order of the eradication of all quincy and there kind.The two had disapeared into the land of the living with their unborn child.They were trying to escape to a place they could be together and raise there family in peace without becoming involved in the two sides war. This was not the case they trusted the wrong person and this resulted in their emminent capture. Shions mother Ayame Shiyi and Aorra Ishida.

Aorra was executed on spot after attempting to stand up to the captain who came to claim his subbortinate soul reaper.And Ayame was taken back to the society after being forced from her gigai.A long trial insued with her in the repentance cell.Which was where she had her kid.With the ongoing war noone cared or noticed she was pregnant they all only assumed she put on weight.They only noticed something was out of the ordinary when shions screams shook up the seretai.Shion was snatched from the floor and taken to the hospitol.And the woman died from shock and having no help.

The infant child Shion was raised by his mothers, brother Kanna Shiyi.Shion grew up thinking of this man as his father.And was never corrected.He was in the stealth force but wasnt a valuble member. Still his influence on them and indeed the entire soul society made him a house hold name.Not only was he well respected but his opinions and abilty to access situations made him one of the only members not born into royalty. to speak on equal ground as a member of the noble families.Shion grew up idolizing him and traing relentlessly with him. Everyday he would become stronger under his influence.Eventually kana rose through the ranks and became the leader of the stealth force.The rest not only resented this decission but began to hate him. Shion was of the age of 10 when he truely began to master the fighting arts.And began going on missions with them following the head leader Yoroichi the princess.

Eventually Shion learned the truth about the night his father was murdered while kneeling at the side of Kanna.He was destroyed in a freak hollow accident.The hollow was like nothing ever seen before. Kanna told shion about the order to kill all quincy and how he is half.Shion scoffed at this idea he had no remorse for the quincy as they were destroying the peace and wouldn't listen to reason.Shions quincy power is dormant and one day may rise to the top.

At age 15 he became a soul reaper acing exams in shunpo and swordman ship his kido was in desperete need of work. He trained harder then ever taking his skills to the next level with the stealth force.

Eventually he was given an oppertunity to work under the current leader of that division and quickly became stronger.One fatefull day his efforts were awarded with the full awakening of his shinigami powers. The shock of the event and the pure power that flowed into him.When he first met his sword Shadrale.He trained hard and hoped for this day for 50 years.But wasnt ready as his body was unable to withhold the power and he collapsed to the ground.Shion remembers the day vividly.It was raining the rain made it so nothing was visable.And in the midst stood a pretty girl.Shions eyes immediatly lit up at her beauty and he began holding her hand and trying to sweet talk her.She didnt yet reveal her identity she just smiled as she said her name.and asked him if he was ready now.He looked at her and asked her what she was talking about.She didnt respond and instead fused with him.
(Heres where we start..with shion just enolling in soul reaper academy")

RP Sample:

"Shion go get the fricken ball" Zeno yelled.A blue vain popped out of his head, as his bald head began to sweat."Who the hell are you yelling at Zeno...Your lucky I dont kick your ass."Shion yelled back.The 4 foot nothing,soulreaper stood, staring at Zeno the son of the Kuchki clan.
"I wonder if you can" He yelled as the two began to fight.To anyone else it would seem the two were trying to kill each other.Only they would know the truth.This was Shion's best friend tho he was of a royal clan.It made being friends harder as Shion was never allowd over.But Zeno didnt care, he spent many of days at the Shiyi house.

The sun beat down on the two as there clothes became ragged and grass stained."You think your so good"
"Is that all you got"
"thats all your moms got"
the two slang insults back and forth while fighting eachother.The fight raged on with both grumbling neither could afford to lose here there record was not close.They had atleast 100 fights, and shion won at the most 3."I wont lose today Zeno"
Shion had lost almost every fight they had.But he never cried., he knew this was the day.Shion flipped over the long arms of his rival.And ended him up in a piledriver position."Now you see my greatest move Zeno.....My pile driver."Zeno laughed oh you think its that easy."As he spoke his legs began falling from the air back to his feet."Uh oh"Shion knew what was coming,as Zeno lifted his spiritual pressure and threw shion over his shoulders.
"Back body Drop..Zeno style"Shion fell to the ground as zeno dived on him.Getting him in his famous headlock position."Your such a loser, Shion"Zeno teased.
"Ill kill you one of these days Zeno" Shion laughed.

Im trying to do this right like i should have the first time.. my original was deemed unuseable so plz just judge this one

[Shinigami Kyra]

App denied for a number of reasons.

The name is the same as the old app
The sample post is the same as the old app
The appearance is very similar, if not, the same anime character
History is the same as the old app

Basically, you have the SAME character we denied, but made changes to it. No, that is not how Unaccepted applications work. You cannot have any shared traits to that unaccepted application, and now, my friend, you cannot use any traits from THIS application because you're basically attempting to loop hole your way around the unaccepted profile by keeping identical aspects of an application that was denied.

This is your second and final warning. Do not do this again.