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Post by eramemory on Oct 8, 2009 23:17:22 GMT -5
Put back up for reapproval.
Incase I didn't state it, preivous power level was Mid Ave.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Oct 15, 2009 16:31:57 GMT -5
"Additionally, all fire-based Kidou gains an extra edge of power. "
How much of an edge?
"Haragei- also known as the sense of perception. Yukihana has develope and hone an innate sixth sense to 'feel' others, thus allowing her to have a much more vivid, accurate soul perception ability than usual. She is much more sensitive to others, and at times may even literally feel what another is feeling.
I'm not a fan of this ability really.
This needs to be elaborated on more. Does it affect her ability to fight in any way?
Also it borders power playing/godmod to know what a person's feeling, and possibly what they're thinking.
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Post by eramemory on Oct 16, 2009 9:17:48 GMT -5
OMG THIS IS PICKED UP AGAIN THANK YOU SO MUCH~~~~~!!!!
Very slight edge. I'll edit that in.
I'll try to add to this more so that it can be explained better. Basically its a feeling...sort of a tension travelling up your spine. Or just a knwledge that something is there. ah...'looking through' a person. (a pretty crappy translation, I don't know how to put it in english, maybe if I can talk to Kamair in Chinese...he might eb able to explain it better in detail)
Breakdown:
It enhances her ability to sense others.
Not that extensive. She is simply more sensitive to another's emotions; if they are angry, sad, happy etc etc.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Oct 16, 2009 16:44:00 GMT -5
I said it'd be done in time.
"A very slight edge"
doesn't explan how it helps her with fire kido.
How high up can she cast? Does she need incantations? Youre leaving so many questions that are unanswered. We have to know the details of this.
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Post by eramemory on Oct 16, 2009 21:54:47 GMT -5
In simple terminology, the fire gets hotter. ABout how high she can cast, I'll put it somewhere in the profile, cause I didn't know that was needed.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Oct 16, 2009 23:46:27 GMT -5
So, Basically she increases the temperature of fire kido... by how much over what length of time?
The thing is, Kido is somethig that has to be extremely regulated thanks to the assortment of abilities, and strengths Kido offers, and making thme stronger makes things even trickier to keep balanced.
It's not simple terminology, either, coz you never made it clear in your app.
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Post by eramemory on Oct 17, 2009 0:55:41 GMT -5
Haha, didn't know it was so complex to have kidou be 'a little stronger...'
Look, I'll just remove that small part and leave it be, okay? Saves us both the trouble.
Anything else to point out, don't hold back. I'd like my profile to look as good as it can be.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Oct 17, 2009 1:29:14 GMT -5
"Bakudo (with incantation): 75
Bakudo (without incantation): 61
Hado (with incantation): 78
Hado (without incantation) :1"
No. Those numbers are way too high making the access to kido WAY too powerful. That's Lieutentant/captain grade stuff to say the least. Thse numbers are going to have to be halved at least.
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Post by eramemory on Oct 17, 2009 2:27:28 GMT -5
Yessir...ma'am.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Oct 17, 2009 2:50:10 GMT -5
41 is still too high.
Honestly, 35 would be too high.
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