Kurokage Yotogi (Done)

[Rebel Raven]

Hello, I'll be reviewing your application!

Autotomising Limb - When his mask is up, Kurokage, through thought alone, can cause one of his limbs to serve from the rest of the body and then quickly regenerate a new limb. This ability is both extremely painful and extremely taxing. It could be used no more than once every few days.

No. This regeneration level is far too powerful.

Ink Cloud Cero - Kurokage breathes a out a black cloud laced with spirit energy. Once the cloud is formed it implodes on everything trapped within. While this attack has the added benefit of serving as a smoke screen to obscure an opponent's view the fact it's expelled as cloud rather than beam limits it to short and medium range usage.

This needs measurements, range, etc. We need to know how large this is.

Kurokage's zampakuto in it's sealed form takes the apperence of a daisho set consisting of a katana, wakizashi, and tanto.

No multiple zanpakuto.

Shikai appearance needs measurements.

We do not allow partial releases as people will, inevitably clamor for partial bankai, and that'll just complicate things as far as powers go.

This time the metal handle is ten sided rather than perfectly round, with each face of the handle bearing one of the kido spells on the now vanished silk

I don't know what you mean by this.

Partial Shikai - The weapon's only ability as a partial shikai is that the chain can extend and retract.

To what lengths?

-He can cast a more powerful version of any of the kido spells on the handle by focusing the spell through the spear point on the sickle.

No. Kido enhancement is a touchy thing. Especially since we have no idea how high up you plan on casting. I.E. You might have the, honestly, boneheaded idea of casting a number 99 kido doubled so it'd be some 198 numbered kido that simply does not exist.

-He can throw the chain weight into the air and invoke any of the kido spells inscribed on the handle through the weight to send multiples of the spell at "regular" strength.

No, this is kido enhancement still. You could easily double, triple, any kido, or even greater.
Heck I don't know how many multiples you plan on using. 2? 4? 10? 100?

this power is a no go.

As the tattoos appear six kusarigama burst from his back. Three coming from each side. The long chains grow directly from his body and end in sickles that look like shikai

no multiple zanpakuto.

Bankai ablities aren't gunna fly. Kido offers an insane amount of variation, and abilities. Increasing them only makes kido more broken than it already is.

[Rebel Raven]

-He can cast a more powerful version of any of the kido spells on the handle by focusing the spell through the spear point on the sickle. The spells will come out at the full power as if the incantation were spoken, but with him only needing to call out the name of the spell.

-He can throw the chain weight into the air and invoke any of the kido spells inscribed on the handle through the weight to send multiples of the spells, up to ten. The more multiples sent out, the weaker each spell is. He could fire off 10 Shots of Red Flame at once, but each would only be 1/10th as powerful as a standard.

You're going to have to specefy the Kido, or at least give me a range so I know you're not going to use fobidden Kido, or some Number 99.

Also the "increase" in power needs more elaboration for the first ability.

As I said before, Amplyfying Kido, an incredibly versatile set of abiliites is a tricky business.

As the tattoos appear six kusarigama burst from his back. Three coming from each side. The long chains grow directly from his body and end in sickles.

While I get the theme, no multiple zanpakuto. I'm afraid this counts as multiple Zanpakuto as there's multiple weapons that can strike at the same time from who knows how many different directions, and can be potentially abused to defend against near any assault while still retaining the ability to cunterattack simultaniously.

Nevermind the fact the chains can wrap a person up while the weaons slaughter them.

So many ways this can be abused, even with rudimentary commands.

[Shinigami Kyra]

No physical changes for Bankai, period. The very MINIMUM physical changes we see, canon-wise, are Toshiro gaining some Ice Armor, and Renji gaining that baboon cloth. No tentacle rape. If you want tentacles, app for an Arrancar

[Rebel Raven]

I originally planned for him to be able to change the spells on the handle, but doing so would require a full day of preparation. This means he'd have to guess what spells would be useful well before any fight starts.

See, that's part of the problem. A day in who's time? From thread to thread his kido can change, his element can change.

He can heal, restrain, attack, defend, and more thanks to Kido. Not only that but he has at least 100 kido abilities under his belt thanks to being able to cast number 50s from both Hakudo, and Bakudo, then there's healing Kido as well.
And his power is just that much greater thanks to enhanced Kido.

FURTHER if in bankai the limit increases then there's just that much more to worry about.

Kido is an immensely powerful weapon that can easily be abused. I'm not sure you grasp what it is you're asking for.

Due to a staff decision we are no longer taking Kido enhancing Zanpakuto.

[Rebel Raven]

We don't have time pass in a concrete manner.

I'd like to point out that the decision to no longer allow Kido amplifying/enhancing/etc. Zanpakuto was not due to you. It was in no way personal.

Shinigami do often use Kido, yes, as do Vizards.
There's limits to what can be cast, though, and limits of how powerful Kido should be.

Kido is incredibly hard to keep balanced as it is. Especially with Paralysis Kido, restraining kido, and other affects that really should never be tampered with as it might push a person above tier.

I.E. Bakudo 63 Sajo Sabaku. It ensnares a target with yellow energy chains. At an equal level it'd be hard enough to escape from. With increased power behind it, it'd possibly be virtually impossible to escape from, and could possibly hold someone a level or two higher.

Yes, it's 13 above what you planned, but it's just an example.