Toratsume Shishiomoi

[combatjunkie]

Name: Toratsume Shishiomoi
Age: 200
Gender: Male
Personality:

He has split personalities. He's a very outgoing person who doesn't like keeping secrets. He's not very trusting but can be trusted with anything. He's almost always happy and he's very kind. the first thing you notice is his big, warm smile. He's very rebellious and hates being told what to do.
Things that make him laugh are a good joke and people trying to act cool. The things that upset him are betrayal and disrespecting or hurting women. When you make him angry, his constant smile goes away, his face gets dark and his already high spiritual pressure skyrockets. He becomes completely quiet and only thinks about killing. Whenever he's not angry he would make a great friend.

Appearance:

He's 6 feet and 2 inches tall, and 200 pounds with no body fat. He has very toned muscles and six-pack abs. He's got dirty blonde hair, with more of it brown than blonde. His hair is 5 inches long, wild, and leaning back windswept. His eyes are deep, blood red, and his teeth are all sharp and pointed. Also he has three parallel scars going diagonally across his chest from his left shoulder to his right hip.
From the waist down he has the apparel of a ninja. Above the waist he wears no clothes. His Zanpakuto is strapped to his left arm with one strap right above the wrist and one strap right below the elbow. It hangs upside down with the hand guard lined up with his wrist. Also his skin is a light tan color.

Hollow Mask:

It looks much like a skull but with ten horns, each 1 foot long. They circle around the top of his head like a crown. The horns are all protruding outwards but are curved upwards. The teeth are all pointed like Toratsume's but with two vampire fangs.

Hollow Powers:

Name of ability-Two Sided Advantage

Effect-Throws his shikai or bankai and it comes back to him like a boomerang for a ranged attack.

Limitations-Only goes 20 feet away before it comes back. Takes 5% spirit energy.

When he puts on the mask the flames on his Zanpakuto (if in Shikai or Bankai) turn black.

Inner Hollow:

It has a skull head with ten horns, each 1 foot long. They circle around the top of his head like a crown. The horns are all protruding outwards but are curved upwards. The teeth are all pointed like Toratsume's but with two vampire fangs. He's eight feet tall. Other that the head he has full body armor. The armor is mostly white but with red spikes on the shoulders, elbows and the backs of the hands. The armor is covered in black flames. Also the armor, along with his body, has a hole in the chest plate.
He's very violent and only wants to fight. He doesn’t speak very much but is full of answers and unknown power. He also sees himself superior to all hollows, quincies, shinigami, arrancars, and vizards. He is very much like Toratsume when he gets angry. Also the black flames will not burn you if you tried to touch them.

Zampakuto's name:

Magyaku Tamashii (Opposite Souls)

Zampakuto Spirit:

He is split down the middle with each side looking completely different. The left side has long blonde hair, a large, white eagle wing coming from his left shoulder blade, and another large, white eagle wing coming from his left hip. The left side also has silver armor from the collar bone down. The right side has short, spiked, black hair and a large, red bull horn coming from his head, pointing up. He has black armor from the collar bone down. Only the right side of his mouth has a long pointed fang. The right side also has a large black bat wing coming from the right shoulder blade, and another from the right hip. The left side has tan skin and the right has red skin.
His personality is very confusing. He is sometimes polite and sometimes rude. He is constantly arguing with himself, and likes to do everything the hard way. He represents the split personalities of Toratsume. It's tough to figure out what he's really thinking because of the two minds. He likes to daydream.
In his world the sky is always red. The ground is full of cracks and craters. The cracks all have giant flames coming out of them. It is also very hot. There is one crater larger than the others that he likes to stay in.

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

A katana with a black handle that has red diamond shapes. The hand guard is in the shape of the yin yang symbol, with the yang portion protruding 1/16 of an inch further than the yin portion.

Shikai Release phrase::

Resolve your conflict and find peace, Magyaku Tamashii!!!

Shikai Appearance::

In the middle is a black katana handle with red diamond shapes. The handle is 1 foot long. Both sides of the handle have a blade coming from them. The blades are 3 feet long each, double edged, with a straight groove in the middle. The blades are also coated with fire.

Shikai Abilities::

Name of ability-Burning Conflict

Effect-Swings the Zanpakuto sending two waves of fire towards the opponent.

Limitations-Uses 15% of spiritual energy.



Name of ability-Inner Conflict

Effect-An extremely powerful release of spiritual pressure harming everybody within a 100 foot radius. The spiritual pressure released is in the form of fire.

Limitation-Can only use 1 time per battle without harming himself. Uses 40% spiritual energy.

Bankai Description:

N/A

Bankai Abilities:

N/A

Skill Level: Kidou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

Toratsume was born on June 11, 1809. His parents were Lisa and Steven Shishiomoi. He grew up in the poor part of town and didn't have very much. Every day he would go outside and play making his body strong. One day he went to play in the woods and was attacked by a wolf giving him the scar across his chest. When he grew older he took care of wild animals to conquer his fear of them.
When he was 30 he died and went to the soul society. He found that he was even more hungry there than in the real world because of his spiritual pressure. One day a shinigami passed him on the way through the gate and immediately felt his spiritual pressure. Shortly after that Toratsume was admitted into the shinigami academy. He flew through the shinigami academy with ease, and became a shinigami in no time.
One day Toratsume was meditating on a cliff with his Zanpakuto when it spoke to him. He wasn't sure what was going on, but he was in a flaming hot world he had never seen before. He was looking around for a clue as to what was going on, and then he saw him. It was Magyaku Tamashii. When Toaratsume returned to his world he took his Zanpakuto in his right hand and screamed, "Resolve your conflict and find peace, Magyaku Tamashii!!!"
One day while patrolling the real world for hollows, he saw a man walking down the street. This man was wearing a tuxedo with a black cowboy hat. The man had sunglasses and an evil look on his face. On the man's waist was a Zanpakuto. Mysteriously the man walked up and asked Toratsume if he wanted to gain more power.
Three days later he found the vizards but didn't know what they were yet. He asked them about getting stronger and they told him about hollowfication. He agreed to become one of them. They put him through many tests to drain his spiritual energy. Then when his remaining spiritual energy was close to 0 they pushed him to the limit. When he could no longer move the others were gone and a hollow was there. It spoke to him at first, and then it attacked. He knew he had to defeat it or make it submit somehow. When he finally did, the others were back and there was a mask on Toratsume's face.

RP Sample:

Toratsume Shishiomoi has always been a nice guy who wants nothing more than to make friends and have fun. He became a vizard because the life of a shinigami was getting boring.
"So what do you guys do for fun?" asked Toratsume.
"Nutin much," replied one of the vizards. "We mainly just tell jokes, play cards, or bet."
"Well that’s not very fun," says Toratsume. "You guys don't play tag, or spar, or hide n' seek, or anything?"
"Nope, not really."
"Well come on, everybody! Were gonna play... baseball."
Toratsume hears mumbles of agreement from the others.
"Ok does everybody know the rules?"
More mumbles of agreement.
"Great! Let's play!"

After the game...
"That was great!"
"So much fun!"
"Wonderful!"
"Wow Toratsume, they're really happy." said the leader. "I haven't seen any of them this happy in a long time."
"Well, I just felt like it was too dull around here."

to be continued...

[Shinigami Kyra]

I started my normal review, but to be completely honest, you would need to pretty much work on every single portion of this application, as it in no way meets the requirements stated in the Applications Guide. As such, I'm sorry to say, but this application is unacceptable.