Lily Hitaki - Arrancar [Ready for judgement]

[jamiechan]

Name: Lily Hitaki
Age: Looks 16/True age 106
Gender: Female
Personality:

Somewhat of a curious woman, Lily is capable of being excitable around those she has been around a while. She is very trustful, not standing for stabbing those in the back. Lily is somewhat carefree, something most find disturbing. She may seem somewhat ditzy, but is quite intelligent behind the personality mask. Quite a merciless fighter, despite her outward appearance and somewhat bubbley persona. She does have a burning hatred for Soul reapers, like many hollows and arrancars do.

Appearance:

Eyes: Almond shaped eyes, with a livid teal hue.

Clothing: See picture.

Body: Quite fit, Lily has a well toned body - soft in all the right places, but firm where need be. Her arms have 2 tattoos- one on each arm. On her left arm is a tattoo of what seems to be the kanji for "Wicca". On her right arm is a wiccan symbol, a pentagram in a blue hue, resembling her element for her birth (Water - Cancer.) She has slightly above average breast size, and attempts to hide it with bandages.

Accessories: A small chain that seems to always be in her array of clothing. It seems to be attached to her belt loops, from the center back loop to the second to the middle right loop in the front. As for why she has the chain or its exact use, it is unknown.

Hair: A semi-dark blue hair colour with straight hair that falls down to her waist. Her left eye is covered by her hair, but allows her to still see perfectly. Her hollow mask fragments reside on the top of her hair, resembling cat ears.

Height: A slender women, just over five feet tall. (5'1)

Weight: 99 lbs.

Hollow Hole: Located just at the beginning of her chest.

The left side is Lily's normal appearance, the right is her ressurecion form.

Arrancar Powers:

Pentagram Cero: Lily is a woman of the Wiccan religion, and has figured out how to incorporate that religion into a sort of cero form. The religion doesn't have any effect on her abilities, but does make this sound cooler - in her opinion. The pentagram Cero is released from the palm of Lily's hand, in which she can shape it into a star like form, resembling, for a split second, a pentagram. The Cero has little difference than a normal Cero, other than it's colour (a solid green) and it's shape. It's range is quite far, reaching at it's peak at a total of 50 feet wide spread.

Reiatsu Nails: A simple arrancar ability developed by Lily, she can form small spikes at the tips of her fingers, made of reiatsu. These spikes mold into claw like appearances. They allow Lily to take on a more feral appearance, giving her the ability to deal clawing damage, with the claw sets digging 2-3 inches inside ones skin. These claws allow her to grip surfaces that would otherwise be harder to do - such as climbing walls and running up walls, and staying on a ceiling for a set time (about 5 minutes, then she falls.)

Natural Arrancar Powers:

Cero (虚閃 (セロ), sero; Spanish for "Zero," Japanese for "Hollow Flash," "Doom Blast" in the Viz translation) are high-powered energy blasts that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Gillians, Adjuchas, Arrancar, and the Vizards have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently. (Lily's Cero has been seen to have a solid green colour.)

Hierro (鋼皮 (イエロ), iero; Spanish for "Iron," Japanese for "Steel Skin") refers to the hardened skin of the Arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released Zanpakut¨­ bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger Arrancar generally have proportionally stronger skin than usual. (Lily's Hierro is generally stronger around her arms, more or less around the area between her wrists and elbows.)

Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat," Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Arrancar and Menos-class Hollows move to and from Hueco Mundo. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.

Zanpakuto's name:

Gato montés

Un-released Zanpakuto's Appearance:

Resurrección Release phrase::

Claw at the abyss, Gato montés

Resurrección Appearance::

(See picture. Right hand side of the picture)

Resurrección Abilities::

Gris explosión - Grey Blast
This ability gathers Lily's own shadow into a small sphere inside of her mouth. This appears to originally be a cero, but in her resurreccion form. This is similar, but not a cero.

This ability gathers Lily's own shadow into her mouth, but can be held in her mouth for an entire minute, then it forcefully and violently explodes. Going over the one minute mark causes damage to herself and those near a 4 meter radius of her, due to the explosion. If she releases it before the minute mark, it shoots out in a sort of beam like wave, with a range of 40 feet and width of 2 feet. Upon impacting, this causes an explosion that has a total 27 feet radius. This ability does not do much damage, depending on how fast she releases it, but does a healthy amount to the target (if she fires fight away, it's weak (probably weak enough as a Bala) but if held long enough, it is as strong, if not stronger, than a Cero.)

Sombra Rascar - Shadow Claw
This attack is similar to her ability "Reiatsu Nails."
It causes shadows - wether hers, or someone elses - to gather around her paws, gathering around the ends of her nails and covering half of her paws. This ability is stronger than Reiatsu Nails, able to smash boulders with the strength, and sever an arm if she places enough reiatsu into her paws. This ability looks like..


That.

Rudimentary Sonído
In this form, Lily cannot use Sonido, but has a technique that utilizes that defect to her advantage. With her sleek physique, Lily can travel at extreme speeds, equivalent and occasionally faster than an average Sonido.

Sombra Escalon - Shade Step
This ability is quite simple. By stepping onto a shadow that is large in length than her own, Lily is transported to another shadow - must be within a 1 mile radius - that is also larger than hers. This is useful for several reasons. Sneak attacks, recovering, hiding, etc.

Gris Pelota - Grey ball
This is an ability that she can perform in her resurreccion. She can build a ball at the end of her tail, solidifying the reishi within it, causing it to take the density of a large rock. She can freely fling this "ball," causing it to explode on contact (with anything) while dealing medium damage (at the minimum, you'll have the wind knocked from you, at the maximum... you die.)

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Sonido: Intermediate
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

Arrancars are hollows who have undergone Shinigamification, which is done by Aizen, using the Hōgyoku. Hollows are creatures who are souls, deteriorated into creatures of unimaginable horror. Soul reapers kill these hollows. This is one sole reason and purpose that the arrancar, Lily, has sworn to eliminate any and all soul reapers. She shares this trait with many others, and shares a deep bond with that promise. Even with her semi-cheerful person, Lily has always had a sour disposition towards anyone or anything with an affiliation with soul reapers.

While as a gillian class hollow, Lily had watched many hollows - thousands to millions - die by the hands of soul reapers. This began a flame of hatred to burn for that wretched race. As she progressed in ranks, more of her hollow allies died before her. Upon discovering the Hogyoku in Aizen's possession, she begged for him to grant her power, in exchange for her eternal loyalty. He granted this, turning the feline woman into an arrancar, one of millions in his army. From that point on, she served under the man, killing all who opposed him.

In the years, she had gained strength. She knew following Sosuke Aizen was the greatest idea she had made in her life. She knew she would not regret this.

RP Sample:

Lily was crossing the desert of Hueco Mundo, her hands behind her back, her sword inches away from the touch of her delicate hand. This was a typical stroll she took, but only one thing different. There was a faint tremor in the ground, underneath her feet. It soon passed though. She let a faint giggle leave her lips as she acknowledged what this tremor was. 'It would seem Bawabawa is playing today..' she mentally analyzed, stopping for a brief second as the tremoring ensued.

A deep, yet faint, growl permeated the air, originating from beneath Lily's feet. "Bawa..."

She began to speak as the worm like hollow shot from the bleak landscape, writhing it's worm like body upwards, it's head bowing down to the blue haired arrancar. "bawa!" she let a soft smile sweep her face as the hollow let it's tongue drop, bringing it across Lily's face in a tremendous lick. "Where's Neliel-san, and her brothers?" she asked, petting the creature while wiping the drool from her face on her sleeve. Bawabawa brought it's head up, twisting it around in various directions. It seemed as if it was semi-worried about being lost.

"Bawabawa! Bawabawa!"

A trio of figures ran across the desert horizon, raising their arms as if to attract the worm hollow. 'There those guys are...' Lily smiled before running towards the three. The shortest of the three had the height of a toddler, with green hair and a scar leading from her skull mask on top of her head downwards, as well as a red mark across the bridge of her nose. She was in tattered clothing. The tallest was in white clothing, with purple skin. It had a mask that looked much like an ants, or a termites. It was hard to tell. The fattest of the three had a tiki mask, with yellow clothing with polka dots. "Neliel-san! Dondonchakka! Pesche! Hiya!"

The arrancars ran towards eachother, exchanging joyous greetings, as if friends for thousands upon thousands of years.

[Shinigami Kyra]

First thing's first; I would like you to re-size the image that you have placed, as it stretches the boarders of the thread itself. For both images, I believe you can simply crop the picture itself. Also a note; though pictures are nice, they should only be used for reference. They should not replace the actual description for appearance.

Personality: I'd like you to extend this just a bit; at least another paragraph. What you have is somewhat good, but it's a bit conflicting. I mean, you say she's carefree, yet vicious in her fighting style. Such two opposites tend to clash, so I'd like you to express her personality a bit more.

Appearance: Lists are nice when starting off, but we ask that you actually 'describe' your character in at least two paragraphs. Write out what you've got, and though the picture is nice, you should only use it for a reference. Get some description in there.

Powers: Everything seems pretty much fine and standard.

Resurreccion Appearance: Same as the above with Appearance. I would crop the images separately and place them in their proper spots. Don't forget to add a description here. Though most Arrancar Resurreccion forms are still somewhat humanoid, I like the route you took in returning to the more animal-like picture.

Resurreccion Powers: Gris Explosión - Seems fine; you have some decent limitations on it as well as a good downside.

Sombra Rascar - Again; pictures don't replace proper descriptions. The ability itself seems fine, though.

Rudimentary Sonído - Seems fine

Sombra Escalon - I'm a little iffy on this; I'll explain below.

Gris Pelota - Seems fine; only thing I would adjust would be the 'you die' part, not really for any reason other than it could be misinterpreted. I understand what you mean, but for others, they could take it as a 'Well, what the hell, does it do little damage, or is it a one-hit insta-kill? That's not fair! *table flip*' and such. Heavily injured or something to that effect; though then again, you already state medium damage, so the last part isn't all that heavily needed.

Overall: You have a total of five abilities for Resurreccion. Normally, I would ask you to limit it to three, but I'll let you keep four. The reason for this is that I believe your transition of Sonido is quite unique, as it also creates a slight weakness for your character, however, still justifies that they are indeed, still fast (i.e., wouldn't make a difference if I told you to get rid of it, other than the 'fvd' sound). In accordance to Sombra Escalon; teleportation is a very iffy power, and we're always very hesitant in accepting a power such as this. The reason for that is through our eyes, the reviewers, we attempt to spot any tiny, piece of information that could be twisted in a way where someone could possibly Godmod. Teleportation is certainly one of those powers that can be abused. I know you have a good limiter on it, but with all the powers that you do have, despite their level of power, I would suggest in scratching that one. Other than that, and the descriptions, I believe I can get ready to accept this application in the next round.

[Shinigami Kyra]

You've reached over the 7 Day Mark; however, since we are currently backed up, I will give this until November 17 to have more editing done. Please post a reply to state that you are still working on this application by Tuesday. Otherwise, it will be moved to Archives due to inactivity.

[Shinigami Kyra]

Moved to Archives due to inactivity.