An Ice Shinigami

[jittyjitty]

Name: Jitsuryoku Hyouton
Age: 150
Gender: Male
Personality:

Smart and Strategic
Jit is very smart and perceptive. He always stays back for the first of the fight to examine their moves. When he went to the academy he always watched fights to gain information. He always goes into a battle with a strategy. He isnt a random swinger. There is always a game-plan. He utilizes the enemy's weaknesses and uses it against them. His mind is his greatest weapon.

OCD
Jit has bad ocd(Obsessive Compulsive Disorder). It means you stress about things being a certain way. For him, things have to be clean, or else he loses it. In the academy, he had to stay in a room by himself. Because he kicked his roomate through the door for leaving his clothes on the floor. So, he has to fix things a certain way, or he goes nuts! Just dont be messy or dirty, and you should be ok.

Chill out
Jit likes to have fun just like he did in the academy. He likes to laugh and talk to his friends. He laughs a lot, and cracks jokes just as much. He is a laid-back type of person. He likes to sit on the beach and watch the pretty waves wash in and out.

Im not weak!
Jit is really fast. It is because he always relies on his speed since his strength is nothing. He is a master at Shunpo. He is still not very strong, but he has great stamina. He never gives up or in. He likes to train for long periods of time just running back and forth from tree to tree. Kids use to tease him for his inability of strength. But when they beat him up, each time he only got faster. This pushed him harder and harder. Soon, he could dodge their blows and do a counter-attack. Ever since, speed has been his ally.

Freeze
Jit uses ice as a healing ability. He loves to help people ever since he was little. To protect the strong and weak, He practiced on animals he found injured.

Appearance:

Gender: Male
Appearance:
Jit has brown hair,brown eyes, and tan skin. He has big eyes and is 5 feet tall. He is very skinny and light. He has skinny legs and skinny arms. He has a skinny everything. He has white teeth, pink skinny lips, and a pointy nose.
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 114 pounds
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Age(looks):15

Zanpakuto Spirit:

Tsumetai Akuma(Icy Demon)

Darkness Falls:

The inner world where Tsumetai lives is a large dead place. There are dead trees everywhere, and it is always dark. There is always a full moon shining at all times. Tsu is a serious and very very smart fox spirit. He burrows in the ground, so Jit has to find him in a new place everytime. It's a challenge for Jit and fun for Tsu. When Jit comes to him, they sit and converse for a while, unless needed immediately.

Tsu's Personality:

Tsu is a very smart spirit and always calm looking. He likes to make Jit run around and make him figure things out saying he has better things to do then disappears into a hole. He likes strategic games and kiddyish games. The only sign he shows of panic is his tail stops moving. Jit noticed this the first time he started to beat him at chess. Although, he has never actually beat Tsu, because every time he gets close, he jumps in a hole shouting,"I'm busy!"

Sealed Zanpakuto:

Sealed Zanpakuto:
Its about two feet long altogether. He is small, so he is quick and swift. It has a black curved handle and curved silver blade. The blade being very sharp and thin to cut swifter. It is easy to grip and keep a hold of.

Shikai Description:

Shikai Description:
This form is about 6 inches long. It is used to cut open stuff like a scapel and freeze cuts. It has strings on the front he uses to tie to his finger to make it easier to operate or keep his hands free.

Release Saying: Hyouketsu sono koukai of sono seken, Tsumetai!(Freeze the international waters of the world, Tsumetai!)

Shikai Abilities:

Icy Mist Medicine-
Jit throws him and Tsu leaves an icy mist that stays about five seconds before evaporating. But, Jit can concentrate the frost towards the target and heal outside wounds by freezing them. Stopping the blood loss and healing the wound at the same time.

Ice Cut-
If Jit needs to get inside of the target's body, he can cut them open and blood loss will slow down leaving time unworried of.

Ice Shield-
He makes the frost turn into pure hard ice to protect him or the injured from incoming attacks.

Bankai Description:

Bankai Abilities: Not Achieved

Bankai Abilities:

Bankai Abilities: Not Achieved

Skill Level: Kidou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Beginner
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

Jit went to the academy. He made good grades and got bullied. Thats how he became faster;to block the blows from bullies. He learned some healing info and learned to operate. He made good progress just like the other students.

When he got out of the academy he went to the Seretei in search of a trainer. He found noone in a really long time. Finally, he found a trainer in Squad 4, Retsu Unohana. She was the leader and very smart and skilled. She taught him to operate better and about different medicines. She even taught him his shikai. She taught him for a while until she knew he was ready to be on his own. She left a huge impact on him and she is a motherly figure to him. He loves her a lot. He wishes to one day serve under her in her squad.

RP Sample:

Jit walked through the woods, trying to find a good place for resting. He picked up his feet as the wind started to blow, and blew his hair up into his face. He pushed it and the sun out of his eyes. He stopped a second to look at the sunset. How beautiful, he thought. He decided that this was a nice place to rest. He then squated down onto the dry grassy land as he watched the sun go down. He poured the rest of his cool water from his water bottle onto his chest. He was wore out from the brutal training. His feet blistered, his hands bleeding.
"Man, what a rough day!" he said to himself. Im beat, he thought as he laid down fully as he watched the clouds dance around each other. A tree branch was swaying in his line of sight, so every now and then his attention was pulled to the tree. His stomach ached from the gruesome training. The wind started to pick up to where he couldnt hear himself think. I think it's time to go home now, he thought to himself. He then got up and ran home to his nice cozy bed. He slammed through the front door and jumped onto his bed. Uh, now to surely await tomorrow's presence, he thought as he drifted off.

[Rebel Raven]

Hello, I'll be reviewing your application.

The attention to details on your personality is well done.

Unfortunately you didn't expend the same amout of effort in other areas of your application which would have made it quite nice if you had.

Basically the largest problem is you didn't put much of anywork into the other areas of your application.

Your Zanpakuto Spirit needs a personality.

Pictures are not allowed to be the majority of the description, so add more details to your character's appearance, unreleased Zanpakuto, and Shikai.

Your shikai abilities need to be formatted so each ability has a name, and a description of each ability.

Please place "Not Achieved" into the bankai entries.

You need to put actual work into your history. Your personality section does not count towards history.

Also, I recommend proof reading your application to clear up grammar, and wording errors.

Post that you've made the changes when you have done so.

[jittyjitty]

I edited it but I changed some stuff.

[Shinigami Kyra]

Edit: This should have been mentioned first; Please Create a Username. I'm actually curious as to how you were able to post o.0 Only because I thought I had set the ability to post to Users only, and only the Advertising Board is Guest Friendly.

Appearance: Please get rid of the list and use at minimum, two paragraphs to explain the appearance of your character. Pictures should be used as guidelines; not a majority of the description.

Shikai: Pictures are nice, but explain it in more detail, as though the picture is not there. If I were to just read the words and not look at the picture, I would have no idea that it's a scythe. Thus, you're using the picture to replace proper description, which is not allowed. As stated, they are to be used as nothing more than guidelines to aid yourself in visually writing out the description, not fully or even partially replacing it.

Shikai Release: Lot of words... it has come to the staff's attention that a lot of people are wanting really really lengthy release phrases. Thus, there may be a new attachment to the Guide that states if a release phrase is more than three words (not including the Zanpakuto Name), then an opponent may have the chance to interrupt the release (similar to how Ichigo did to Senna during the first Bleach Movie). Thus, I would suggest shortening it. The most common is a single release phrase/word. The only person to have more than one is the old man, and of course, Ukitake and Shunsui; of course, they both dual wield, so it's understandable that their release phrase is more lengthened. There's Hitsugaya and Soifon too... aside from them, three words have normally been the max; I'd say 19 out of roughly 33 have only single word releases. Out of the remainder, 9 have a maximum of three words. That leaves a total of about 5 Shinigami with more than three words. That's 5 out of 33; roughly 15%. That 15% however, are almost all Captain Level, Dual Wielding, or ridiculously powerful. As such, I would suggest shortening the release phrase. Further details on this will be put into the Guide in a new section.

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Shikai Abilities: Please explain the detailed physics behind each technique; how often he can use it, how powerful they are in accordance to his spiritual pressure, how strong the ice shield is, how big it is, and how many attacks it can withstand before shattering (if that's what it does). How long it takes to summon, so on and so forth.

"If Jit needs to get inside of the target's body, he can cut them open and blood loss will slow down leaving time unworried of."

Time unworried of? I don't know what that means. Please explain this ability in more detail; is it a healing ability? Or is it actually a reverse healing ability?

Please explain in detail what the mist's capabilities are in full.

History: Please give at least four paragraphs; add two more to what you have, at bare minimum.

[Shinigami Kyra]

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