Hizoruki Metsuki (Shinigami)

[hizoruki5]

Name: Hizoruki Uzumaki
Age: 2500; looks 17
Gender: Male
Personality:

He is easy going, but is very powerful even if he seems to look serious. He also, is a hardworking but lazy shinigami with a long patience, he usually doesn't look for trouble but has trouble look for him. He abides by rules but will break them in order to help or save a comrade. He is not the one to mess with, for he usually will play around until things get serious. Though he usually is out of the village or at his house locked in his room, he is usually a really friendly and kind person. He also had a good childhood, so he is not mean or really scared. He almost met his death when going up against a group of arrancars but defeated them in order to live. He is now very cautious of others. He sometimes will wear pink to let people know that even if you where bright colors, it does not change whether your strong nor weak. His skills can be brute and he has never been real shy. His size is never really a problem for him yet others do pick on him about his size. Being short he thinks gives him an advantage. Not much is known about him but he is quite quiet. He hates spicy foods and hates hot headed people. He is kind but is always serious about things. Most Captains pick on Hizoruki because of his size and how much spiritual energy his zanpaktou will let off though it holds a great deal of spiritual energy. No Shinigami in the Seretei has seen his release form or his Zanpaktou's full abilities.

Appearance:

Hizoruki has Blue eyes, the color of the sky. His glasses are made of steel and of glass. He usually will wear a pink shirt to school and/or outside of school. He also wears a watch. His eyes do not usually change color. His watch is very solid and is made of titanium metal. His glasses are also made of titanium metal so in the case of wearing them, they will not break to easily. He also wears tennis shoes instead of your regular shinigami wear. He had obtained these special shoes from a small shop in the World of the Living. He has tan, but white skin; by this I mean he is caucasian. He never really smiles at anyone, but you can tell he has very good hygiene. He also has very white teeth. He usually bathes everyday to keep clean from the dirty streets of the Soul Society. He likes to keep things organized for you see he is quite organized when it comes to clothing and such. He always gets his hair cut the same to keep his odd trend up. He never goes to bed at night without brushing his teeth and bathing. He is very clean and a very decent young shinigami/young man.

Zanpakuto Spirit:

This is Toshimaru, the Elk. Toshimaru is a calm spirit, but very powerful and wise. Toshimaru is very quick in powerful when in his realm. He has brown fur and he can speak Japanese and English. He is a very intelligent spirit and is very calm but can be quite uncontrollable if he goes over the limit.

Sealed Zanpakuto:

Toshimaru is a very unique Zanpakuto. It has a black blade with silver trimming running down its sides. Its handle is also black with a silver hilt. It has the ability to manipulate light into solid energy that is harmful to spiritual beings. Called, Ametsuaru.

Shikai Description:

Toshimaru is a very unique Zanpakuto. It has a black blade with silver trimming running down its sides. Its handle is also black with a silver hilt. It has the ability to manipulate light into solid energy that is harmful to spiritual beings.


When in Shikai form, Toshimaru is unchanged. Though its released, its appearance does not change a bit. This is not to fool the enemy either. But the power and ability of Toshimaru changes a great deal. Its speed and cuts are more powerful than it was in its normal form. It also is much more powerful physically when landing a physical attack upon an opponent. This does not make things difficult for Hizoruki because he can control powerful objects such as his own zanpaktou.

The release phrase is; "Toshimaru Show them the Light!!"

Shikai Abilities:

Once in its released form, Toshimaru's blade can be turned into pure light, or energy wave. If its swiped at someone, the blade can send a wave of light energy. The wave of solid energy looks like a thin wave with rigged ends but however the sword is swung, the different each wave looks. It is white.

Bankai Description:

Not Avaliable

Bankai Abilities:

Not Available

Skill Level: Kidou: Advanced
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Beginner
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

Hizoruki was born four hundred years ago to a merchant who dealt in only the highest class of goods and therefore catered to mostly the high nobles. His father started as a low shopkeeper who was forced to become a fairly good swordsman out of pure necessity. Eventually he got married and started catering to the higher echelon of Soul Society. Hizoruki was very lucky to be born in District 3 of North Rukongai. Hizoruki's mom died of complications during birth and as such many of the children around him during his growing up days made fun of him. Before they moved to the lower numbered districts of Rukongai he was taught swordsmanship, both as a nessecity and as training for the hope he would become Shinigami. From the age of 50 he got into fights with others around the districts. When he turned 75 he was attacked by some thugs and before he fought them off with his skills with a blade one of them caught him in the left cheek with a knife and opened him from nose to throat which never healed right leaving him with the scar he has now. He had very few friends growing up due to his dad thinking most kids were urchins and his training he had no time. Although his mother had died during childbirth as a consequence of at that time still in a high numbered district of Rukongai, his family was one of the most wealthy families in all of Rukongai ranking among the five great noble families in terms of wealth. He was trained in his father in the basic sword arts hoping that he would be chosen as a shinigami. They were not led astray. He was chosen at the age of one hundred twenty to be a shinigami and taken to the academy. At the Academy he was one of the highest in his class his skills with a sword on par with many of the best in his class. His kidou skills left plenty to be desired but he was still one of the top students due to his high skills with a blade. His teachers held him in such high esteem for his swordsmanship that he was placed in an advanced Shunpo class. When he was given his Zanpakutou everyone was amazed at its raw beauty in form and grace. When he graduated at age one hundred and twenty years old he was immediately picked up by the 12th division because of his excellent skills with a blade and also his intelligence. When he entered the 12th division he was placed on the bottom as all newbies are and expected to do whatever he was told. Being the lazy one he was he didn't like it that much and soon pushed back. He began training night and day when he wasn't on duty and sometimes when he was. He quickly progressed from that point until at age two hundred he was the fifteenth seat of the 12th Division. By age three hundred he had moved up to 10th seat. He actually went from unseated to 15th in one day. He had served under the 18th seat for a while before deciding to move up. Not wanting to unseat his former commander he challenged the 17th seat then the 16th then the 15th in quick succession who upon being defeated so easily by a former unknown were demoted to grunt and a new person appointed to their former seat in their place. Approximately 90 years later he challenged up to the 10th seat.
Unfortunately at this time he was chosen to lead a group of inexperienced shinigami in his squad in a patrol of an unusually high concentration of hollows. They had been patrolling for several hours without a single sighting of a hollow when they decided it was about time to go back to Soul Society. As Hizoruki was turning to leave the white desert, they were attacked by several Huge Hollows. Hizoruki was hit in the back by a hollow and taken temporarily out of commission. When he came too the hollows were feasting on his comrades and he felt rage explode within him. His reiatsu skyrocketed and the hollows turned toward the reiatsu wave he was sending out. He exploded into action before they could make some stupid comment and slaughtered all but one. That one was coughing up its own version of blood when it said "They tasted oh so good." Apparently this was not the right thing to say because Hizoruki slowly tortured it until it dissipated and died purely from the pain. His fight had attracted 12th Division's attention who alerted 11th division who sent their captain and and a seat member to see what had happened. He turned smirked at them and passed out suddenly. For the next hundred and fifty years he trained hard and long unlocking his shikai and then mastering its fighting style as well. Over the years many challenged him and he swatted them down with the skill he had before his training to keep it nice and secret. He wanted to be worthy of the new found respect his Division-mates had bestowed upon him with his nickname. So he decided to target the 4th seats spot as the current one was unworthy of that honor being the lazy swine he was. This leads up to ten years ago with him beating the former fourth seat of the division. If you were way over your head on the battlefield he would step in and save your butt. If you were depressed he would take you out for a drink to cheer you up with a couple of the guys. He became inactive for about 100 years and is now just a shinigami of the 12th Division.

RP Sample:

Hollows came through the rip in the sky by the numbers. Reinforcements would not be there quickly. Hope for reinforcements looked inevitable for the Division 10 Captain and his subordinates. The night time sky lay ripped still, more and more Hollows coming out by the dozen it seemed. The moon was just a back drop the showed the shadows of the hollows. The rip was filled with ominous darkness. The night remained loud for the shinigami but silent for those of the living world. The stars were bright and they too, directed they're light towards Earth. All this commotion in such a small town. It seemed that soon, that the shinigami would be wiped out from the, what seemed endless, amount of hollows.

Suddenly, there was a popping noise in the humid air of the night. You could not see where it came from and even the hollows' stopped in they're tracks to see what had happened. Then, close by a large, yet powerful Spiritual Level or Energy could be felt present. Suddenly there was a shinigami above the hollows and then stopped in front of them. From what one could see, he had come alone and was wearing shinigami. He then suddenly drew his zanpaktou and drew his blade and just swiped it in front of a very large group of hollows. Blood was thrown into the air and the hollows that had stood in front of the captain were dead. More were coming but seemed far away for the moment. "Captain.......are you telling me that you had to have reinforcements called for such a simple task?!" he yelled, sternly and seriously at the captain. "And you shinigami! You stand there, just awing and commenting on your captain's abilities! You would be killed if these were stronger hollows!" he yelled. He then closed his eyes calming himself. "So. What do we have here Captain?" he asked a bit pissed at the Division and Squads that stood before him.

[Shinigami Kyra]

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