krow
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Post by krow on Sept 24, 2009 15:21:02 GMT -5
I fixed the armor.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Sept 24, 2009 16:40:31 GMT -5
Your armor doesn't take into account assaults from people of a higher power tier.
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krow
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Post by krow on Sept 24, 2009 16:55:47 GMT -5
How about now.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Sept 24, 2009 17:46:14 GMT -5
"After 3 or 4 hits the ice begins to crack. If someone of greater power were to attack the armor would shatter after 3 hits. "
Not a whole lot of difference between shattering and cracking unless the shatter means it's completely gone.
"Icy chill- Whenever he swings his zanpakuto a flurry of ice crystals explode out to the enemy at a maximum range of 20 feet. The weakness of this technique is that if someone of equal power were to coat them self in riestu they could block the attack."
I'd like to think that's not the only way to defend against the attack.
Also you have an extra skill set, and history entry that needs deleting.
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krow
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Post by krow on Sept 25, 2009 11:13:17 GMT -5
When I said the armor shatters i meant completely shatters. I fixed that in the description as well as there being a way to avoid the Icy Chill blast. Thanks for the heads up on the extra skill set. I've deleted those as well.
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Post by Rebel Raven on Sept 25, 2009 20:39:48 GMT -5
Approved
Middle Level Average
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