New Shinigami (done)

[ayamesayomi]

Name: Ayame “Ayu” Sayomi
Age: 134 (looks 21)
Gender: Female
Personality:

Ayame is generally a very social person who loves to make new friend. She is very kind-hearted to the point of where she can be easily tricked to do someone’s work. She is young and seemingly naïve, though she is actually far more experience than first perceived. She does not like fighting, but she will if needed to and if that is her duty. She can be a bit of a flirt when she find someone she likes, but she tends to be more shy. If you are close to her, her personality will change into a more playful and less shy person who seem alot less elegant than how she acts normaly.

Appearance:


(ignore ears)

She stands at 5’7 and has an athletic yet curvy body. She may seem to other as a very “developed” woman. Her skin and smooth and has no imperfection that shown and except for a birthmark on her right wrist which is usually cover up by a pearl bracelet given to her by her living father. She has long blond hair that flows down to her mid-section and has bang covering the right of her forehead witch compliments her shimmering blue eyes. She wears the traditional Soulreaper uniform.

Zanpakuto Spirit:

Her spirit, Mai, has a personality that clashes with her, Mai is hot-headed and obnoxious and like to fight any chances she get. Mai is quick to insult and does not worry about frivolous things such as boys, she take every fight seriously and try to push that towards Ayame. Mai is passionate about the art of fighting and is Ayame’s instructor and teaches Ayame whenever she can.

Sealed Zanpakuto:

It appear in that of a normal katana that she wields on her right hip, not too long not too short. It has no special parts and is not unique in anyway.

Shikai Description:

Blow them away Mai”
A gust of wind is emitted from her katana and envelopes her, as it disperse her katana will disappear and she is left with gauntlet and boots. The gauntlet is that of a martial art fighting gear and covers her fists completely along with her wrist and reaches nearly to her elbow, giving just the right amount of room to provide comfortable free movement of her elbow. The gauntlet appears like a violent gust and it seem to rise upwards as it moves away from the fist. The boots resemble that of martial artist boots, both the gauntlet and the boots are completely black.

Shikai Abilities:

Her shikai provide immense strength, from her gauntlet and immense speed from her boots. The gauntlet is envelope in her reitsu that constantly circle her shikai at immense speed. Her Shikai is a wind-based Shikai which provide her with an unique ability when she lands a punch. On contact the reitsu that was gather in her gauntlet is release, releasing a large gust of wind at the enemy that provide more damage than just an average punch along with forcing them back (umm 1 meter?), however to get the reitsu to release, she must provide enough force to the punch thrown in order to release the compact reistu.(meaning when defending or if the punch is somehow soften, it is not able to release the reitsu. The weakness is most of the Shikai ability can only be activated on contact; therefore the range is quite limited.

Her feet do not provide moves and the kind of ability that her gauntles has, but instead it provide her with an increase speed and agility so the limited range would be less of an issue.

Raging Wind- her strongest move in where she focus all reitsu on her right arm and launches a powerful uppercut/punch, the power of all the reitsu in one punch is immense and skyrocket/blow away the enemy in the air and the enemy will not be able to recover mid-air because of the immense hit, however after the move even if it misses or it’s block, her reitsu would disperse and she is unable to use move temporarily (2-post?).

Divine Wind- her only range move in which she release a powerful gust of wind that can shoot 3 meters away by using half her reistu, of course this will weaken her punches by half until recovery.

Bankai Description:

not developed

Bankai Abilities:

not developed

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Intermediate
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

She was born in an average family with no luxury, but enough food. She was quite happy with her life and did not ever bother thinking about her current situation. She was known in her village as the blossom of the town and acted quite elegant despite her status.

She was later notice by a noble family who was quite interested in her skills and how she manages to resolve problem with ease. They later adopted her family in and she had suddenly changed to noble status, in which her family was quite proud of her. She soon later founded out that they had arrange a secret marriage to make her family status legit.

She soon went into hiding by escaping to the real world using the noble’s gate and tried to live alone there, but she did not know of her high reistu and how it attracted find-like beings call Hollows. She encountered one when she was exploring the real world and nearly loss her life if it weren’t for a soul reaper who saved her. She remembers the soul reaper’s face and soon dedicated herself to join such an elite group after being forgotten by her family. When she graduated, she was assign under the 5th squad and later would developed her Shikai on her first mission facing a hollow alone. She hopes she would able to eventually find the person who save her and at least properly thank her/him.

RP Sample:

Ayame slid to a stop around a corner as she watched a soul being killed by a hollow. The menacing hollow was cover by the veil of darkness and its outline was blurry. She narrowed her eyes and looked up to the moon, before she started off again, running still at a rather fast pace. She sensed a large amount of reitsu from afar and knew she was getting close to the target.

She slid to a stop again, panting as she reached back and put a hand on the hilt to her blade. It felt close, whatever it was. It was close and her heart was pounding, there were butterflies in her stomach, her blood was racing through her veins and her body was shaking with the adrenaline that was feeding her energy. She was sweating hard as she tried to swallow a lump in her throat waiting for the right time to attack. She was going to do something big, and she was not sure if she was ready for it.
Her legs were trembling with fear as she begins to lose the grip on her sword.
“Damn it move you coward!!” Mai, her spirit, voice bellowed in her mind “Are you going to let another innocent soul that, you’re part of the patrol unit so do something!!”
She knew her spirit was right, but this was her first time fighting alone, she always had back-up and so she was still an inexperience fighter, she did not know if she could manage to wipe out such a menacing hollow.
“Don’t worry Ayame, we’ll fight together!! Now call me out already!!” Mai bellowed once more.
Ayame close her eye and came to her sense, she breath in deeply as leap out toward the hollow. “Blow them away Mai!!” she yells passionately, unsheathing her katana and charging straight at the Hollow. As she unsheathe her Zankpakuto, a gust of wind envelope her and surround her like a raging tornado. The tornado charge at the Hollow and a fist suddenly pierce its wall and land with massive force at the hollow launching it away with a large blast of wind. The tornado disperses and she stood their breathing hard, as small gust blow against her.
“Heh told you didn’t I” Mai snickers in her mind.

[Rebel Raven]

Hello! I'll be reviewing yur application.

First off, you have
"Her feet do not provide moves the kind of ability that her shikai has, but instead it provide her with an increase speed and agility so the limited range would be less of an issue.

Raging Wind- her strongest move in where she focus all reitsu on her right arm and launches a powerful uppercut/punch, the power of all the reitsu in one punch is immense and skyrocket/blow away the enemy in the air and the enemy will not be able to recover mid-air because of the immense hit, however after the move even if it misses or it’s block, her reitsu would disperse and she is unable to use move temporarily (2-post?)."

in your history.

I'd like you to proof read your application to fix typos to make it easier to understand, too please.

[ayamesayomi]

okay I did what I can

[kenpachi]

Approved.

Medium Level, Average.