New Vizard(Sykon20)

[sykon matsomoto]

Name: Sykon Matsamoto
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Personality:

A stubborn laid back person. He tends to ignore people and never takes no for an answer. He is a fast and agile person who hits first and ask questions later. If he see's someone in danger he trys to help them but usually doesn't notice because he ignores people alot. He would die for a friend or someone important without any hesitation or any regrets. He gets into alot of fights but doesn't like to. He tends to not finish fights and runs or makes the enemy give up.

Appearance:

He wears a white shirt and a black robe that hides his face in the shadows. He has black jeans but usually wears cloth pants. When he isn't wearing his robe he is wearing a jacket which is black with a skull on the back. He has a strong torso and fast legs.

Hollow Mask:

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(The design is at this link)

Hollow Powers:

He can use cero but it isn't fully powered like gran cero or stronger. He can also use bala(hollow bullet) which he doesn't use very often because he hasen't unlocked its full potential.

I know you know what cero is but here is what bala does.

Bala(holow bullet):Reiatsu glows around a hand and he releases it in one solid punch that explodes reiatsu wherever he punched.

Inner Hollow:

It has a pitch black body with a tail with blue strikes going around it. Its eyes are pitch black and it has an intent to kill. It's head is perfectly matched to its mask.

Zampakuto's name:

kuroshi'akatsuki

Zampakuto Spirit:

A dark figure who hides in the shadows he wears a dark robe that shrouds his face in darkness and he wears a mask. He lives in the shadows. He is a dark shadey person who doesn't talk much but tends to show himself alot.

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

it looks like a normal katana but has a black strike through the middle.

Shikai Release phrase::

Dark death at dawn.

Shikai Appearance::

Sword is bigger and has a black glow around it.

Shikai Abilities::

It can release a black and white blast when slashing at the ground.

If it makes contact to the opponent black and white goes in the opponents body and burns/shocks/slows him down.

Bankai Description:

The sword reverts to look like a normal zanpaktou but is pitch black and has a white glow around it. It looks really powerful.

Bankai Abilities:

It shrouds the opponent in darkness and a million swords that look like the shikai and bankai appeareance pop out and it uses the burn/shock/slow abillity from shikai.

It makes the user super speed and flash step is perfect and he can dissapear instantly and not be seen for miles.

He can also copy the shikai/bankai from the opponents zanpaktou or copy a hollows abillity that he cant use.

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Shunpou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

He was born a human but died and was sent to the soul society. He was raised and trained there as a soul reaper. He was advanced in swordsmanship and hand to hand combat but he didn't stop there and continued to train. Wierd abillitys started popping up as he used cero on a hollow which died instantly. His fellow soul reapers were stunned but ignored it and thought it was a side effect from his training. He then used hollow bullet(bala) against a hollow which the soul reapers were still confused on how he used it. The soul reapers ordered an execution against him. He ran from the soul society at full speed but was caught by the soul reapers. They attacked him at once but a mask formed over his face and he killed every single one. Once the mask formed he screamed as he murdered them all one by one trying to stop himself but couldin't. The mask dissapeared and he was left unconcious sorrounded by dead soul reapers on the ground.

RP Sample:

Sykon was running through the forest from the soul reapers when he tripped over a root growing from the ground. "damnit!" he yelled as he jumped up running some more. He turned to see 5 soul reapers with there swords out following him at full speed. Sykon the turned quickly and released a cero at them but he didn't know how he did it. He turned back and continued to run. A soul reaper appeared infront of him but his fist started to glow as he released a bala full force into his face. The soul reaper went flying as he continued to run. Then the last 3 soul reapers appeared infront of him holding a sword towards him as he stopped. He was slashed mutiple times by there swords as he fell to the ground bleeding uncontrollable. The soul reapers were about to finish him off. Suddenly a mask appeared over sykons face as he dissapeared and quickly slashed the soul reapers killing them all. He screamed as the soul reapers fell and grasped the mask screaming and falling to the ground unconcious.

[Ai]

Juuust a few things you need to clear up, such as Hollow Powers, try expanding on their descriptions, such as "He can use cero but its only half powered it isn't black cero." is somewhat confusing, because what do you mean that it isn't a "black cero"?

And as for the personality section, the opening line you say he ignores people, but then two sentences later you say he helps people as much as he can. That's a contradiction without any explanation into the contrast. So, try explaining why this antisocial figure suddenly turns right around and attempts to help people as much as possible. Such a thing isn't unheard of but there's generally a reason for it.

So, try to clarify those things, and also expand on some what you already have that I did not mention, have some fun with it - get descriptive. That's about it.

[sykon matsomoto]

Lol i wanted people to notice that XD i'll fix it ^_^

[Ai]

Ooookie doke. Alter the Shikai a lil'bit:

Increases speed 5x original speed
increases strenght 5x original strenght.
swords skill is 5x better

That there isn't really needed, because when a Vizard or Shinigami utilize there Shikai, their abilities and reiastu increase with it. So those alter that bit there, and I'll approve it.

[sykon matsomoto]

fixed again.

[Ai]

Okie doke.



Mid Level Average
No Bankai (For now, get out there, get involved with some plots and whatnot and you can earn it moving up a tier. )

[sykon matsomoto]

LOL!!!!!!!!!
CHUCK NORRIS!

APPROVED!!! XD!! WHAT THE HELL!! THATS FUNNY AS HECK!!! LMFAO!@!@!@