Ninstruck (Modified)

[ninstruck]

Name: Ninstruck
Age: 450
Gender: Male
Personality:

Psychotic and very violent. Ninstruck loves to kill his opponents slowly with his poison to make his opponents suffer. Ninstruck is very obsessed about getting his revenge on the ninja clans that killed him by eating the souls of their descendents. He is also very prideful about his looks. He also has bad luck when it comes to women.

Appearance:

Has short brown hair and has a green eyes. He also has his hair in a messy look. A calm look on his face at first, but is quickly becomes psychotic when he is in a battle. Ninstruck’s mask covers his forehead and his left eye. The mask also has two antennas on top. He wears white clothes. He is 6'0" and weights 160 lbs.

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Arrancar Powers:

Green Cero: Cero is a form of attack used by Menos, Arrancar and Vizard. Basically an energy blast, it consists of firing a blast of concentrated spirit energy at the target. While in most cases it is fired from the mouth, some Arrancar and Vizard are capable of firing Cero from their hands, fingers and other parts of their bodies. This often requires the user to under take a specific pose, with Starrk being the only exception.

Toxic Breath (Ninstruck blows poisonous gas through his mouth which poisons his opponent.The poison does more damage to the opponent littlie by littlie as the battle continues.)

Natural Arrancar Powers:

Hierrorefers to the hardened skin of the arrancar, which is a result of their compressed spiritual power. While their skin is strong enough to block even released zanpakuto bare-handed, it is by no means impenetrable. Stronger arrancar have proportionally stronger skin. Nnoitra Jiruga claims his hierro is toughest amongst the Espada.

Pesquisa is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami ability to sense Spiritual Pressure. It functions similar to a sonar. Using pesquisa requires most Espada to enter a meditative state; however, Nnoitra Jiruga has a variation of this technique that involves placing his fingers to the ground to determine an opponent's approximate location as well as the amount of Spiritual Pressure an opponent has.

Sonido is the Arrancar equivalent of the Shinigami flash steps and the Quincy hirenkyaku; it allows the user to travel at incredibly high speeds for short distances. Use of son¨ªdo is punctuated by a brief static sound, in contrast to the "swish" sound used for flash steps. Zommari Leroux claims that his sonido is the fastest amongst the Espada.

Zampakuto's name:

Monarch

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

The zampakuto’s blade has a sharp side and a dull side. Also the zampakuto’s blade is very thin. It has a brown handle. There is a black cap at the end of the handle. The guard of the zampakuto is black and circular.

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Resurrección Release phrase::

Defile, Monarch

Resurrección Appearance::

Ninstruck grows green hair all over his body. He then grows butterfly wings on his back. The butterfly wings that have grown on his back are very large. They are also very colorful and have different types of pollen on them. His mask then starts to cover his whole face and the antennas on top of the mask grow longer.

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Resurrección Abilities::

Poison Pollination (Ninstruck gust poisonous pollen fibers with his wings which poison his opponent. The poison does more damage to the opponent littlie by littlie as the battle continues.)

Paralyzing Pollination (Ninstruck gust paralyzing pollen fibers with his wings which paralyzes his opponent for one turn. Ninstruck can only do this once per battle.)

Acid Pollination (Ninstruck gust toxic pollen fibers with his wings which damage his opponent and their weapon with acid burns.)

Poison Butterfly Wings Barrier (Ninstruck uses his wings as a barrier that shields him from his opponent’s attack.)

(New move)Poison Butterfly Wings Sword (Ninstruck detaches his wings from his body, so he can use his spiritual energy to forge his wings to make a sword . The sword looks like Ninstruck’s zanpakuto but is longer, the blade itself is 6'0" tall. After Ninstruck uses this ability he can no longer use the abilities Poison Pollination, Paralyzing Pollination, Acid Pollination and Poison Butterfly Wings Barrier for the rest of the battle.)

(New move)Poison Butterfly Wings Sword Flutter (Ninstruck moves his Poison Butterfly Wings Sword rapidly to make illusions that his sword is attacking from all sides to confuse his opponent. So while his opponent defending against the illusions Ninstruck uses the opening to strike the opponent with his sword.

Skill Level: Kidou: Beginner
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Advanced
Skill Level: Sonido: Intermediate
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Intermediate
History/Background:

Ninstruck was born in a ninja village. Ninstruck never knew who his parents were, so he had to rely only on himself in life. So Ninstruck become a ninja so he could be strong and live on his own. As the years went by Ninstruck become one of the best ninja in his village, but Ninstruck grew bored of leasing to the leader of the village.

So Ninstruck become a mercenary working for the highest bidder. Ninstruck quickly become feared in the region because of his sword skills and his mastery in poisons. Then one night in the forest Ninstruck was walking to a ninja village to get paid for getting a “job” (killing ninjas from other ninja villages) done, but then ninjas appeared surrounding him. The ninja clans in the region were working together to have Ninstruck killed.

Because the ninja clans in the region all agreed that even compared to ninjas like them who were assassins trained to kill, the mercenary Ninstruck was a monster. So they began to attack him. Ninstruck put up a good fight but there were too many of them. After Ninstruck died he could not pass on, he was bound to the earth because he wanted revenge on the ninja clans that killed him.

As time pasted Ninstruck become a Hollow because of his lust for revenge, but Ninstruck felt weak so he opened a portal to Hueco Mundo. Ninstruck then made a cocoon for him to rest until he regained some strength. After Ninstruck was done resting he opened a portal to the world of the living so he could get his revenge on the ninja clans that killed him, but Ninstruck soon found out what he thought was a couple of days of rest in the cocoon was really a couple hundred years. The ninjas that killed him were now long dead, so Ninstruck swore that if he couldn’t kill the ninjas that killed him then he would eat the souls of the descendents.

RP Sample:

A portal from the Hueco Mundo opened on top of a tall building in the world of the living. It was soon after the portal opened that the Arrancar called Ninstruck appeared in world of the living. He was there because he heard that one of the descendents of the ninja clans that killed him, died in this city. Flying down from the tall building and on to the road, Ninstruck began his search for the soul of the descendent of one of the ninja clans that killed him when he was alive.

So after searching the city for a couple hours he found a sprit of a man walking on the sidewalk. Ninstruck then started flying closer and closer to the sprit.

“So are the descendent of one of the ninja clans that I’ve been looking for”, said Ninstruck to the sprit with an evil smile.

But the sprit didn’t answer; instead he screamed and run away from the Arrancar called Ninstruck. Ninstruck started flying after the sprit, but it was too late he saw the sprit standing next to a Shinigami then disappeared.

“What the hell did you just do Shinigami”, said Ninstruck angry.

“I sent him to the Soul Society, so you can’t eat his soul”, said the Shinigami.

“You dare to get in my why. Do you know who I am”, said Ninstruck angry again.

“Yes I do know who you are; you are the Arrancar called Ninstruck. You were also known as the “Toxic Caterpillar” when you were a Hollow. But I don’t care about that I’m not going to let you eat someone soul, and who knows the higher-ups mite give me a rank for killing you”, said the Shinigami with a grin.

Then the Shinigami started to attack Ninstruck with sword, but all he could do was make small cuts on Ninstruck’s body.

“You must be joking if you think you can kill me when your so weak ha-ha-ha”, said Ninstruck.

After Ninstruck had taunt the Shinigami he blew toxic gas through his mouth at him, then the Shinigami fell to the ground.

“What, did he die just from that small dose of poison? What a loser ha-ha-ha”, said Ninstruck as he began to eat the Shinigami.

After Ninstruck had gotten done eating the Shinigami he opened a portal to Hueco Mundo, so he could rest until when he gets back to the world of the living again.

[Shinigami Kyra]

Since this'll be replacing your other application (to which I noticed you just kinda subbed pictures for descriptions), I'd like to ask you to do just that; replace your pictures with actual words, describing the appearances and all that.

The illusion technique... seems alright, I guess, since it's simply an illusion and no real added damage to a basic sword attack. So, just add a little detail into those sections. I know it was already approved without the information, but if you could do so, it would be greatly appreciated.

And also, for the abilities that are basic canon ones, if you could produce descriptions for those as well, it'll save a bit more time in getting your new abilities.

[ninstruck]

Ok, done.

[aeria]

Hi there! The name's Aeria and I'll be picking up where Kyra left off...

This: "Looks like a normal katana with a brown handle." Does not cut it, I'm afraid. Kyra already mentioned that pictures do not substitute descriptions, so I'm going to add that one sentence-descriptions don't count. We like to see a good 3 sentences -MINIMUM- for a description. And that's something that'll put you in the lower half of average, so do you really want that? No. You don't. I Don't want that for you. I'll make a suggestion: give us a good 5 sentences at least for all these descriptions. I don't care if you say that the sword is "normal;" because how do we know what that is? Define normal. Lengths. Colors. Textures. What's "Normal" about it?

For description, you can have each sentence be one aspect of Ninstruck. "His hair is short: shoulder length--straight, without a slight twinge or curl; it's the color of hazelnuts, with a slight glow about it when touched by light." There you've got an immensely satisfying description of his hair, and there's one sentence. Do a couple of those for each description, and you'll have our hearts.

Thanks for your time! I'll be pleasantly awaiting your revisions!! ^.^

(Yes I am aware that this was an old character, but these kind of descriptions are expected now. Think of it as what you need to further demonstrate to deserve your modifications. )

-Aeria

[ninstruck]

I have fixed it. Thank you for the advice.

[aeria]

Thank you for the revisions!

Approved: High-Level Average