Tallinn Arellenzeck --Done--

[aurius]

Name: Tallinn Arellenzeck
Age: 8000
Gender: Male
Personality:

Tallinn is normally a little drunk; wise and powerful he dislikes most people especially young people. Despite his strength and bad demeanor, Tallinn actually hates to fight considering it the work of young folk with nothing better to do with their time. For the most part Tallin spends his time drinking, smoking, praying (sleeping), training (because the ladies love a man in shape), and lecturing youngin’s he doesn’t like. To women Tallin is a hopeless romantic and perv, often proposing marriage to women before learning their name, and using cheesy old man pick up lines or pretending to have a heart attack so he can get mouth to mouth (though this is a somewhat rare occurrence). His voice is light hearted and cheerful when is he is drunk, but gruff and deep when he’s angry. When angry Tallinn will often mutter or break out into long lectures about young folk, often switching from one topic to the next as he forgets what he was angry about.

As a leader Tallinn demands discipline and loyalty, He has a great respect for the chain of command and absolutely demands everyone else does as well. Tallin is also incredibly wise and knowledge being an encyclopedia of Kido spells and chants, not to mention a few of which he invented (or at least claims to have). Having been alive for centuries Tallin has become an amazing black smith capable of forging weapons that will never dull and never break. He very often will sell these weapons in exchange for good sake or anything else he might want.

In combat Tallinn takes an extremely superior attitude to his opponents often saying that they were too young and too inexperienced to fight someone of his caliber. He tends to become slightly crazed in his released state laughing excessively as if too a private and gruesome joke. However, Tallinn has chosen a path that avoids combat partially because he simply feels to old and the other part to atone for his sins, as such he has taken a vow to heal any Arrancar he finds wounded (unless he wounded'em for being whippity). He will not heal hollow however he considers them lesser life forms.

Appearance:

Tallinn is old by any account his hair has receded to the point that his shining baldhead is framed in a U-shape by a tangled white mess of thin hair. His once bright blue eyes have been dulled by the cloud of age, while a faded scar runs across his right eyelid and down to his left cheek; a white-scaled circle resembling plate armor in design surrounds his right eye. Thin gold spectacles lay on the bridge of his crooked nose his lips are surrounded by a thick white beard, which extends to the ground in a pointed triangular design. His lanky but extremely strong physic lays hidden beneath the robe of a Shinto priest, the actual robe is dark brown with a light brown inner layer, A thick dark red sash wraps around his waist a black hilt sword, the blade is white with a serrated edge and is forged from pieces of hollow bone. The symbols for justice, mercy, and sake are stitched in an ancient language onto a large golden brown priestly vestment that lays draped across his shoulders framing a large red bead necklace. Strapped to his back by a golden rope is a large brown gourd, broken down into three circular sections of decreasing size, the base of the gourd being the largest, the neck being the smallest, the opening to the gourd is sealed by a large cork.
Tallinn’s hands are slightly large for his size, and while they look old and withered he is quite strong. Height wise Tallinn stands at 6’8’ but he normally remains hunched over his baggy robes disguising his height and making him look about 6’4”. A small quarter size hole goes through the middle of his neck starting above the right shoulder and coming out above the left.

Arrancar Powers:

Sonido master:
Tallinn has been using Sonido to support his kido based fighting style for centuries and as such has become incredibly talented at it and can move with incredible speed even able to release .

Enhanced Heirro:
Tallin is extremely durable, and this is amplified in his released state. Average physical attacks will not be able to penetrate his skin.

Thermal vision:
Tallinn can adjust his eyes in order to see on a thermal spectrum, (if used outside of resurrection his eyes become reptilian.)

Natural Arrancar Powers:

Cero:
Tallinn can fire a powerful green cero out of either his hand or mouth. The cero fired from the mouth is significantly stronger but requires longer to charge.

Gaganta:
Tallinn can rip open a portal in time in space allowing him to move himself and others to far away locations

Master Pesquisa:
Tallinn has an amazing ability to detect the spiritual pressure of others and the ability to mask his own very well.

Zampakuto's name:

Hanguri-Enmu (hungry mist)

Un-released Zampakuto's Appearance:

Tallinn’s Zanpakuto is the gourd strapped to his back, it is normally filled with the finest Sake and floating in the bottom chamber is a circular blade too large to remove from the gourd.

Resurrección Release phrase::

"Burst, Hanguri-Enmu"

Resurrección Appearance::

As Tallinn releases the beads around his ankles, wrists, and neck began to glow followed quickly after by the ring around his eyes. Then his gourd bursts releasing a thick cloud of white fog. In his released state Tallinn takes on a reptilian appearance, his baldhead sprouts a webbed spine and his hair disappears, his eyes gain thermal vision and become red and snake like. The necklace becomes a plate mail guard around his shoulders, with slits along it, and chain mail surrounds his neck. A mask appears over his now slightly elongated jaw and nose with horizontally separated vents. His fingers fuse; the pointer and the middle become a foot long claw and so do the ring and pinky. His thumbs extend into a thick curved claw so that when he closes his fingers together they become a hollow spearhead. His feet become like those of a velociraptor raptor two large clawed toes support a third raised one the rest of legs become covered in interconnecting plate mail, two thick slits opening on either side of his shin. Across his back just below the shoulder blades is a tube with a grate on either end. His body also takes on a reptilian feel the skin becoming white scales and a lizard like tail extends down to the ground.

Resurrección Abilities::

Passive Abilities
Unending fog: When Tallinn releases the slits on his body as well as the initial blast from the gourd create an incredibly dense fog reducing visibility drastically. The fog is released at a steady rate from the slits in his mask and shoulder blades as well as from the slits on the sides of shin.

Increased agility: Tallinn’s reptilian body is much more agile then in his unreleased form, giving him increased reflexes and the ability to move at an extremely fast rate.

Iron Claws: The talons on his hands and feet are unbreakable, and can be used to block attacks.

Active Abilities

Mirage: By controlling the angle of the water in the mist Tallinn can create a single mirage within it. The mirage cannot be two separate things unless they are touching and it can take any form Tallinn wants but it is just a mirage with no physical substance.

Deadly talons: When Tallinn wishes to water filled with tiny metal needle like talons will flow from the pipe across his back, the talons are infused with a highly potent neru-toxin, which causes hallucination, a person injected with the toxin, would begin to see extreme color and spatial distortion as well audio hallucination in the form of a ringing noise. (the effect of this poison lasts for roughly 2 posts per hit. ie. if he was stung once by the tail then blocked another swipe only to get hit again it would last for 4, however if Tallinn were to hit the person again while he was poisoned, ie, after the persons first poisoned post, the poison would have no effect until the last doses effect wears off. Basically to stack poison posts the hits have to be from the same post.)

Current wall and spike: By creating a wall of currents flowing in opposite directions the wall is enriched with Tallinn’s energy and a dense flow of talons, though it is not very strong it can be raised quickly. It can block most physical attacks and slow down and reduce the potency of most powerful energy attacks. By slamming his hand on the back of the wall and using the vocal command ”Spike”, he can cause the wall to disperse into small individual drops of water each with a talon in it, the needles then fly forward in the shape of the wall. The wall itself is roughly three feet wide and four feet tall. (the poison from this strike is of a higher quality having the same effects as the poison mentioned above it lasts for 3 posts but cannot be stacked.)

Bloody mist: Whenever someone bleeds within Tallinn’s mist the blood is instantly vaporized becoming a thick red mist. Tallinn can manipulate this mist in order to bind his opponent; the mist is exactly as strong as whomever the blood was taken from. Because the mist is created from particles of foreign reiatsu it will eventually revert back into blood. (lasts for 1-3 posts depending on severity of wound, ie how much blood was released, strength of mist is a reflection of physical strength).

Tail Javelin: Tallinn pulls off his tail, the severed limb then begins to glow with energy the mist swirling around it, Tallinn can then throw the tail, which will explode on impact with a powerful burst. It takes five posts for the tail to grow back.

Healing mist: Possibly the most powerful of Tallinns unreleased ability Tallinn concentrates all his fog into a small orb in between his palms filled with small talon like needles covered in a low level paralytic like Novocain, by submerging a wound in the fog Tallinn can use his fog to surgically manipulate the patients flow of energy causing the wound to heal at a rapid pace. The drawback to this ability lies in the time and concentration required to maintain it, it requires all of Tallinns focus to repair any wound and it takes an increasing amount of time depending on the severity of the wound. As such this ability is effectively useless in combat only a viable option if someone is protecting both Tallinn and the wounded person he is working on. (Tallinn is unable to heal himself. This ability is done by manipulating all of Tallinns abilities simultaneously; look at rp sample for clearer explanation)

Skill Level: Kidou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Intermediate
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

THE HUMAN YEARS
Tallinn was born to a war like tribe with three siblings all brothers, at the age of eight he was considered a man of the tribe, of his brothers two had died from the curse of the gods (Malaria). The other one Arrell was one of the most promising young warriors in the tribe. Tallinn however was born under the sign of the gods and as such his destiny to become a shaman had been chosen. Over the next few years Tallinn rose in strength and powers, his tribe was war like and worshipped powerful reptilian gods, who demanded human sacrifices on a regular basis. On the day of his thirteenth birthday he was proclaimed the second highest spiritual authority in the tribe referred to as a Musha Saishi (Warrior Shaman). Short only of the high priest and war chief in ranking he was treated with great respect, both for his services as a shaman and his ability as a warrior. Fourteen months after being named Musha Saishi Tallinn was on a hunting expedition when one of his warriors took a bite out of a yellow lizard, dying almost instantly from the powerful poison in the creature’s veins. Intrigued Tallinn decreed that hunters would trap and gather these lizards a request from the gods. Tallinn quickly learned the creature’s blood could be used to poison daggers and arrows. The people of the tribe considered this discovery to be a sign of the lizard god’s favor for Tallinn. Ambitious and intelligent Tallinn emerged from his tent one day and said in a language long forgotten ”The time is now my brothers, last night the great god Querenaletzek Fenos came to me in my sleep. The high shaman and warrior chief have abandoned the tenants of our god too long has it been since we have seen glorious combat, as payment for their sins they must be sacrificed.” Since most of the villagers believed Tallinn to be a conduit for their god they listened with blind obedience tying up and sacrificing both high shaman and warrior chief that night. On that day Tallinn became the leader of his tribe under the title high shaman, he quickly appointed his brother Arrell as the second in command warrior chief.

Under Tallinn the tribe flourished using poisoned weapons they quickly became the undisputed masters of the area, of course the secret of poison became a highly guarded treasure that only Tallinn and his most trusted allies knew. As days blended into months and years Tallinn was no longer the chief of a tribe but of a small empire, spanning over the territory of forty tribes who he had conquered enslaved, or converted. Tallinn became obsessed with expansion so much so that he ran into a larger empire and a war began. Tallinn refused to listen to offers of peace declaring their god Querenaletzek Fenos would protect his chosen tribe. However battles fought with the foreign power did not show such favor though Tallinn’s men were armed with poison among the first humans to use it, they were simply out numbered and they lost almost every encounter. In a year Tallinn’s empire was reduced by half, his brother Arrell pleaded with Tallinn to accept defeat and become a puppet king, however Tallinn would hear none of it he was after all chosen by the gods. It was this arrogance and blind devotion that allowed Arrell to become angry enough and desperate enough to plunge a dagger through the back of his own brother’s neck.

THE FIRST STEP
Tallinn’s anger over his brother betrayal grew at a quick and steady pace, transforming him into a powerful hollow. Lizard like and cunning this beast form of Tallinn was a creature who fought using poison and agility. In the white desserts of Hueco Mundo Tallinn did nothing but feed on other hollows, becoming more and more powerful on the 500th day after his initial transformation he found a large clump of fighting hollow. Considering this to be his opportunity to feed like he had never fed before he jumped in slashing clawing and consuming his way towards the center of the mass. Soon the large clump of hollow fused into a menos grande. His time in the menos grande was a constant struggle against the minds of other hollow and the simple stupidity of a menos, soon however he began to feed on other Menos one after another falling to his power. After a century as a menos he consumed his final foe transforming into an Adjuchas class hollow.

HOLLOW YEARS
As an Adjuchas Tallinn took the form of a large humanoid lizard, his mask looked like the face of a komodo dragon with large horns. While his salvia had healing properties the rest of his body and every single weapon he had was covered in a viscous poisonous slime. His feet remained similar to a velociraptors and his hands were the same as his release form. As an Adjuchas his favorite move in combat was powerful dart fired from his throat with a paralytic poison in it. For years he became a creature of stealth and destruction releasing poisonous blasts at his opponents and consuming them while they lay helpless. For seven hundred years he roamed the wastelands of the white dessert hunting any hollow he found and growing in strength. As the years passed Tallinn became powerful, manipulative, and a master tactician. Untrustworthy and deadly Tallinn would often gather groups of companions in his quest for power only to poison and consume them when he no longer needed them. Tallinn became ruthless a cold hearted monster by any definition. A thousand years after becoming adjuchas Tallinn rose to the form of a vasto lord, five hundred years from that day Tallinn took his first breath as an arrancar, the transformation was something he would never forget, he had just finished a battle with another vasto lord and was consuming the creatures corpse his body weak from the battle. Almost as if it was a compulsion Tallinn’s hands snapped to his mask pulling wrenching at it his mind on fire with pain, as he tore the mask off giving birth to Tallinn the arrancar.

ARRANCAR PART 1
Tallinn rose from the ground an Arrancar, for the next two years he wondered the dessert aimlessly living the life of a predatory creature; deep within he began to feel a hollowness that can only be attributed to lack of purpose and, that’s when he met Gaun Chi. Powerful and wise Guan Chi was the leader of a group of six natural arrancar who together with a selection of powerful vasto lords, ruled the darkest depths of Hueco Mundo. Tallinn was welcome as the newest member of their group. Guan Chi was powerful, strict, ruthless, and the best teacher Tallinn every had, for two thousand years Tallinn trained night and day under Guan Chi, he learned fighting tactics, war strategy, blacksmithing, and Guan’s favorite class sake appreciation, when he wasn’t studying he was enduring terrible physical trials, called training sessions. In these sessions Tallinn would have to fight poisoned, injured, and sleep deprived against hordes of enemies. Despite these hardships these were possibly the best years of Tallinn’s long life he rose in stature among the council exterminating those who would challenge him, he soon became known as Tallinn of the mist a ruthless and powerful arrancar, Guan Chi’s prodigy. Together with five other arrancar, including Guan Chi, they ruled the darkest depths of Hueco Mundo with an iron fist their slightest whim became law for any who wished to survive. As the years passed Tallinn’s ambitious nature returned. Why just Hueco Mundo? they should rule earth, soul society, anything and everything. Tallinn put this to vote in front of the council and Gaun Chi summarily dismissed it, saying they lacked the numbers for such an invasion. Tallinn was infuriated by what he considered Gaun’s betrayal. Three days after Gaun suggests to Tallinn that they train in the pits of Acellzenef a dark cavern extremely difficult to get to it was the most secluded place in Hueco Mundo. Tallinn prepared a knife with an extremely powerful paralytic poison, Gaun Chi should have known better. Upon reaching the caverns Tallinn snuck up on Gaun driving the knife deep into his body. Guan’s eye’s shuttered in realization of the monster he had created named Tallinn. As Guan lay immobile on the ground Tallinn walks over calmly he leans down running his claw down Guans face cutting a deep gash down his cheek, ”I wish this wasn’t necessary Guan, but don’t worry I wouldn’t leave you here, no my friends can take care of you”. Tallinn turns a red mist flowing behind him, as the seven adjuchas who had followed them there revealed themselves crawling out of the shadows growling with hunger, Tallinn walked away his former mentor unable to scream as he was consumed alive.

RISE AND FALL
Tallinn returned to the council chamber battered and bruised claiming the shinigami had attacked and that they had killed Guan Chi. Together with the other arrancar they decided a counter attack was necessary, however the issue of numbers remained. That was when the council decided to begin force feeding they took the strongest Vasto Lords and began to feed them to one another forming three new arrancar, among them was Cecille. Beautiful and deadly Tallinn fell almost immediately in love with Cecille, her flowing dark hair crowned by the remains of her mask which created a tiara, Cecille was gorgeous ruthless, cruel, and manipulative. Tallinn loved her with all that he was and quickly proclaimed her his queen. For a century he gathered his army and a fortnight before the attack he awoke to the sound of combat. Cecille had never loved him in fact the only thing she loved was power. Cecille led her men to the walls of Tallinn’s citadel a large dome shaped building with four gigantic towers. The battle in its entirety took fifteen hours and cost the lives of every Vasto lord and arrancar fighting except for Cecille and Tallinn. The final showdown between the two ex-lovers took place in the throne room, The two fought neck and neck for two hours but it quickly became apparent Tallinn had been around longer, had killed many more and in the end he tore her throat out with his claws. Tallinn dropped to his knee’s crying when he saw the bleeding form of his lover in an act of desperation he tried to repair the fatal wound but he lacked practice in healing and the wound was deep, she died in his arms. Tallinn sat there as her corpse faded away he did not move he did not speak for ten years.

THE LATEST YEARS
After ten years Tallinn rose a different man his once vibrant and youthful body had been decayed to that of an old man by hunger, dust and spider webs fell off of him in a cascade as he rose. Tallinn was tired more tired then he had ever been in his long life, he felt the weight of the world crushing down on him. He made his way out of the ruined citadel the destruction from the battle long since covered over by dust and decay; the corpses on the bottom floor had been consumed. Tallinn didn’t know and didn’t care about the fate of his empire he just felt empty. Tallinn made his way deep into the white dessert where he discovered a cave. For the next four years Tallinn developed the cave putting up a wooden door at the front, building a forge and making a home, Tallinn spent the next three thousand years developing his abilities in healing, never would he be unable to save someone again. It was on the three thousandth day of his training that something changed, he had just finished a beautiful white sword and was using his mist to stitch together a rug, a practice technique he had developed to help him focus his healing energies and control the needles hidden in his mist he used to close wounds. The knock echoed through cave his first visitor in a thousand years. His name was Aizen and he wanted Tallinn to become a member of his group, The Espada. Tallinn refused he was old and tired, but he made an offer to Aizen, he would heal any man he brought to his workshop he would ”Train the whipper snappers” and he would forge weapons, any that Aizen needed. Tallinn still felt a respect and love for the Arrancar race and liked Aizen considering him his first friend in years, Aizen visited Tallinn two more times with requests and for a cup of sake, Tallinn liked these visits, surprisingly he found his quiet and powerful new leader to be great company. Today news has just reached Tallinn of both Aizen’s loss in Karakura town and of the budding new organization in Las Noches. Grabbing a long wooden walking pole just slightly taller than himself he makes his way out into the white dessert for the first time in years, ”I’ve gotta show these whipper snappers what being an arrancar really means.”

RP Sample:

Tallinn walked up to a wrought iron gate along a stonewall, the old arrancar leaned against a long walking stick just slightly taller than him. Pushing the door open it screeched as the rusted hinges rubbed past on one another. Slowly but steadily he made his was down a stretch of road, his priestly robes and long flowing beard blowing in the wind as he passed beneath a long row of cypress trees his foot steps heavy from the large gourd strapped to his back, the evenings light dancing between the leaves. Emerging from the shade of the tree’s Tallinn stood in front of a large stone house, with a circle driveway. Ivy crawled up the walls and the windows were boarded shut. The remains of a marble statue could be seen in the middle of a small island of grass surrounded by the driveway. Tallinn turned to look behind him as another arrancar tall with black hair and a mask around his lips, he was covered from neck down in a white arrancar uniform like that of the exquitas a habit from before he was Tallinn’s fraccion. ”And what would this pile of junk be, Sire”. Tallinn rubbed the bottom of his nose with his finger,
”What this pile of junk would be, you disrespectful whipper snapper is my new…. That’s what you yougin’s seem to miss these days, respect. It’s your music and your fancy-pancy artificial arrancars. You lack proper respect… just the other day I was almost knocked over by a kid on a skateboard on the way here. We gotta stop these kids from skateboarding on the sidewalk.”
”uhm, Sire”
”I will not have my mental condition called into question, My mind is just as sharp as it was five thousand years ago and I’ll not have you forget it.”
Tallinn swings his walking stick down onto the head of his fraccio, knocking him out the poor servant crumples to the ground in a heap.
”take that ya holligan”
Tallinn laughs a high pitch wheezing chuckle as he pops a bottle of sake that was tied to the rope attached to his gourd, taking a swig and walking into the building, he would heal his fraccio later if he remembered.

This is just something to get a feel for the healing power.
Tallinn closed his eyes holding his claws about a foot and a half apart from one another, the mists around him condensed in between his palms small needles appearing within it. He held his hands on either side of the wounded arrancars leg, the cut was deep and he could see the bone. His needles straightened as he focused swooping the first one into the wound he lined either side of the wound with needles on either side. The bone was the first thing to heal, the damage to the bone was minor nothing more than a small gash in the bone focusing the flow of energy to the damaged point the bone sealed over. The blood from the wound began to turn into mist exiting from one side of the wound and flowing to the other re-solidifying. Muscle fibers attached to the needles fired from each side of the wounds, the needles intertwined with one another in flight reforming the arrancars' quadriceps, according to a projection of the proper path shown in the mist. Finally he closed the skin his breathing slightly labored he spoke,
”That’ll be a bit sore but you’ll live, now stop bothering me you waste of youth, back in my day we would walk injuries like that off.“

[aurius]

DONE, posting just cause I started it a little bit a go ;D

[Shinigami Kyra]

Greetings and Salutations; I am Kyra, and I will be reviewing your application today.

Personality: Nothing to change, but just wanted to point out that it's an awesome personality. Stay true to it! I might make an Arrancar just to spite this old pervy guy!

Appearance: Very detailed, nothing to change here either.

Arrancar Powers: Got three, they look good, but... just a question, really. His eyes will turn reptilian if he uses his Thermal Vision outside of his Resurrección form, right?

Natural Abilities: They're fine. I'd get rid of 'perfectly' though in being able to mask his Riatsu. Just stating that he can do it is fine, saying he can do it PERFECTLY is... well, just avoid the word Perfect by all means in applications. Godmod characters use that word.

Resurrección Abilities: We talked about this in the chat. You've got about 9 right now. I like them; they're not generally overpowering, some simply being simple attacks. Since you're going to be editing the Kido portion of it, I'll just wait to see the results.

Everything else looks fine; History's HUGE, but very good, from the parts that I did skim over. I'll actually read everything through once you've made the editing you've announced. Post a reply when you've finished.

[aurius]

OK that should do it.

Yes his eyes do turn reptilian when using thermal vision outside of resurrection form.

In the interest of honesty I modified the personality very very slightly, and I made a few changes to the history cause he was using kido.

I chose hand to hand skill advanced, cause I assumed that this was more related to fighting with claws then sword skill. I just want to make sure I was right about that.

Thanks for the compliments ;D

[Shinigami Kyra]

Approved, High-level, weak