Emerus Hideki (done)

[aurius]

Name: Emerus Hideki
Age: 120
Gender: Male
Personality:

To describe Emerus in one word is annoying he is the little brother who sits next to you in the car screaming ”im not touching”. Energetic and optimistic to a fault Emerus enjoys everything, and likes almost everyone even if they don’t like him. Quick to consider someone a friend he is likely to give him or her a nickname even if they don’t like him. Although it was already mentioned Emerus never seems to get tired and treats life like a kid at an amusement park, with almost no attention span he is easily distracted even by something that is just shiny. While he hates violence and would never participate it in it directly he isn’t phazed by it either and has no problem with people dying in fact sometimes he considers it funny. However he is far from timid and when upset is not beyond yelling and throwing a temper tantrum.

A prankster at heart Emerus enjoys seeing people slip and fall, he has been known to carry around a small bottle of hot sauce to dump into people’s food before they eat it. Emerus loves to trick people and will use his powers to that effect. Perhaps his favorite past time is going to the human world and messing with humans that are not spiritually aware, pinching the bottom of a girl standing next to a guy. Eating their food while they’re not looking ect. Emerus has been described as a bottomless pit by some he will eat absolutely anything and everything and is never full anyone who meets him is instantly surprised by the massive amounts he can consume in one sitting. Perhaps the final note about Emerus and maybe his ultimate vice is his weakness for games, incredibly competitive he loves to play games his favorite being tag. He is a sore loser and is known to throw temper tantrums and accuse others of cheating.

Although Emerus is not normally violent, once he releases he gains a distinct blood lust and becomes somewhat cruel. When dealing with enemies he is sure he can beat he will often toy with them often attempting to frighten them and messing with their minds to confuse them. As a result of this Emerus has practiced and become well versed in the art of throwing and disguising his voice and while in battle will often throw his voice to throw off his opponent. The raise in blood lust could be seen as linked to his more predatory hollow stages that is suppressed within his zanpakuto. While in his resurrection form Emerus’s natural voice changes drastically from light airy form of his natural self to a dark and raspy voice more fitting to his resurrection.

Appearance:

Roughly three foot eight with short bright green un-kept hair, yellow eyes and tan skin, Emerus appears to be ten years old. He almost always wears a pinstripe long sleeve shirt though the colors will change, as his wardrobe is basically variations of that shirt and a pair of blue jeans. Weighing roughly eighty pounds he has a string bean body shape though when he eats many are amazed as his stomach expands to monstrous proportions. He has propensity for wearing sneakers of varying bright neon colors and carries his Zanapkuto strapped across his back in a black sheath.

The remainders of his mask are two small horns protruding from his forehead and two strips behind his ears. His horns have a spiral pattern engraved on them are curved and roughly three inches long. The strips are barely noticeable as they are hidden behind his ear, they are engraved with an elongated spiral pattern.

Arrancar Powers:

Shape shifting: Basically self explanatory Emerus can transform into any human, un-released arrancar, or vizard he has seen. He can also extend his reiatsu to shift his clothing as well. However he must retain either his horns or the strips behind his ears. If Emerus is hit while in this form in anyway enough to cause him pain he instantly reverts back to his regular form. Emerus can hold his transformation for a maximum of three posts before he has to transform back into himself.

Phantom cero: by concentrating his reiatsu Emerus can create six glowing green spheres these are what Emerus calls phantom cero points. By concentrating his energy with a quick spark to activate one (this simply appears as them all flashing) they will all glow however only one will fire. The glowing dots are in a fixed position and can fire up to three times before they disappear and Emerus must wait before using this ability again. Only one cero can fire at a time and the cool down time is three posts after the last cero is fired.

Natural Arrancar Powers:

Bala- The ability to produce a small bullet like cero that is shot from his hand and moves roughly twenty times faster than his normal Cero.

Cero- A bright Green Cero fired from his hand.

Advanced Sonido- Emerus is very talented with Sonido and can use it extremely well. As a result of this he has developed an amazing level of endurance with its use allowing him to use it rather frequently. This includes no speed boost beyond what is normal for someone of his tier level and skill level. (of course he will eventually tire if he uses it too much.)

Zanpakuto's name:

Niebla Consumidora

Un-released Zanpakuto's Appearance:

Emerus’s Zanpakuto is roughly a foot and a half long from tip to the end of the hilt. It is wielded with one hand, the hilt is a steel circle with a black leather wrap leather wrap and is five inches long. The guard is flat but if looked at straight on looks like a swirl around the blade. The blade itself resembles a slightly wider katana with a serrated edge.

Resurrección Release phrase::

Flujo, Niebla Consumidora

Resurrección Appearance::

Emerus’s resurrection is a strange one; at first glance he appears to be five-foot eight black-cloaked figure with skeletal clawed hands. His face is a white skull with a mask almost non-descript it shows no facial features but seems to be made of bone, green eyes glow in the never-ending dark pits of his eyes an his mouth sits on a nose less featureless face. The top of his head lies under a black hood with six pointed spines hanging out through holes where the back of the neck should be. In his right hand he carries a traditional English long sword with a nondescript silver handle and a black wrap. Within the black cloak besides the hands, face and spines is nothing but black mist. With the head and hands floating independently and the spines connected to the back of the skull by black ropes

Resurrección Abilities::

Shrouding mist: By dissolving his cloak into his mist like reiatsu Emerus creates a thick black mist that surrounds his opponent, Emerus can control the thickness of this mist and create a maximum of a 10 foot moving radius of mist around his opponent. However, the mist must keep exactly one foot away from the skin of his opponent. The mist is non lethal but it cannot be blown away, as well Emerus can control the thickness of this mist to make it appear like there are figures in it.

Spider spines: The six spines sticking out of the back of Emerus’s cloak can be freely manipulated the inch in diameter spear head like spines are connected to an equally thick black rope like substance created from the mist. These ropes extend up to ten feet and allow Emerus to strike using his spines. The spines can sprout three spinning blades from through out the tip that jut out a half-inch and begin to spin. These blades only appear if the spine is exposed to blood.

(note severed spines grow back in two posts.)

Bleeding mist: A two step ability, first an opponent must remained injured with an open wound for two posts. From this point the blood dissolves into a red mist, which flows into Emerus’s mouth creating a connection between Emerus and his opponent’s wound. From there on out Emerus can surge his reiatsu through the wound causing an extremely painful burning sensation, almost as if someone branded the wound with a red-hot poker.

Skill Level: Kidou: Advanced
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Intermediate
Skill Level: Sonido: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Beginner
History/Background:

As a Soul Emerus wasn’t angry wasn’t perturbed he was simply bored no-one saw him no one spoke to him and for a ten year old that was annoying as hell it was as if he didn’t exist. He spent most of his time running after people making faces or spitting at them all to no avail however as much as he tried he never got any responses. After a year wondering around dragging his chain next to the sidewalk he had slipped and got by car at. A large hollow appeared at first Emerus was scared of the creature however when he realized that it could see him he was so happy he screamed ”Hi”; The last words that came out of his mouth before he became a hollow.

As a hollow Emerus was a spider like creature with a white fanged mask. He wasn’t angry or mean, just hungry. He ate everything souls, shinigami, other hollow anything he could consume. He also had a distinct advantage he could release a mist like fog out of his mouth to engulf and consume his opponent, never giving them the chance to fight back. It was several years into his hollow state that he saw a large clump of hungry hollow and had the bright idea to try and eat them all. Jumping close he released a large flow of mist into the crowded but soon learned he simply didn’t have enough fighting together they soon merged into a single Gillian.

As a Gillian Emerus’s life was basically that of any other move around eat stuff, move more eat more, eat another Gillian ect…

When he finally became an Adjunchtas Emerus looked completely different similar to a mini-grim reaper Emerus appeared to be his standard mask shrouded by a large black cloak. However again Emerus found himself bored and hungry, so he ate what he saw when he could and played with his food a lot but could never really entertain himself. After about a decade of this Emerus heard of a shinigami offering to boost your power and turn you into an Arrancar, With snap Emerus decided that it might be fun so he went out searched him down and made a deal.

RP Sample:

Regular Emerus:
Emerus walked through the narrow hallway of the barracks of Las Noches, a smile on his lips and a bottle of hot sauce in his pocket he stopped at every torch along the way to extinguish it leaving a trail of darkness behind him. Once finished he turned back walking towards the entrance to the hall way six torches on each side outside six rooms, and six random arrancar who had left them open. With a smile he whipped out the bottle of hot sauce and walked into the first room and began shifting through the drawers, like most the top draw of the dresser was the right guess. Smiling Emerus lifter a pair of green boxer shorts and flipped them inside out dropping hot sauce onto the crotch before reversing them sliding them back into the drawer grabbing the next one. When he finished every pair of underwear in the six rooms Emerus left re-lighting the torches and speeding out of the hallway more fun was to be had.

Off to the kitchen he sped, running through the corridors of Las noches laughing hysterically. However as he ran he passed a window looking to the courtyard where two Arrancar were fighting. Though from this distance he couldn’t make out who they were he stopped to watch for a bit mostly because he forgot what he was going to do before hand. Clip, Clop, Clip, Clop the sound of someone walking down the marble hallway sounded pulling Emrus away from his show, it was followed shortly by a loud pained scream ”EMERUS”.

Down the corridor and popping out of the hallway came a large fat bald Arrancar, nearly triple Emerus’s size the lumbering oaf’s mask was a round white circle around his eye. His hairy stomach bulged over a pair of green boxer shorts as he charged at Emerus a fire of anger and pain in his tear filled eyes. ”Im gunna KILL YOU, YOU ANNOYING LITTLE BRAT” Screamed the Arrancar as he sped towards him.

Emerus smiled his hair receding to make his head as bald as the angry Arrancar, ”You’ll have to catch me first, FAT HEAD”. Emerus yelled speeding down the hallway away from the angered behemoth. Quickly he darted from corridor to corridor as fast as he could zigzagging and taking every turn he saw. He new Las Noches well and was accustomed to running through it as a result of that he knew exactly where to go. After roughly five minutes of running he reached his destination a large banqueting hall and without a second thought his entire body shifted he grew taller and lanky his long sleeve shirt and jeans becoming a white uniform, while his wild green hair became short and purple. Finally his face shifted into the ever-smiling visage of Ichimaru Gin. Quickly he went to the chairs at the front of the hall placing him self in the seat of the arrancar leader. Most arrancar felt uncomfortable around him and left quickly and the bald lunk was no exception. The lumbering behemoth flew into the hall stopping quickly, ”Sorry Sir, uhm… I’ll be going now”. Emerus snickered as he shifted back into himself had the idiot looked closer he would have seen the two mask fragments hidden behind his Gin impersonations ears.

Resurrection form:

Emerus walked through the halls of Las notches heading towards the front gate apparently two shinigami had wondered into the arrancars ancestral home and were causing a bit of ruckus it was his job to end it. His small hands pressed against the large stone doors of the main entrance pushing them open with surprising ease. As he stood before the two shinigami he looked them over, one stood at around six feet with green hair and a large broad sword, while the other stood at about five feet wielding what appeared to be a lantern.

”I don’t suppose you’ll just leave… fighting you two would be boring. Plus im tired and hungry, oh and I just got the new assassins creed. So as you can see I really don’t have time to deal with you.”

The green haired shinigami needed nothing else quickly he dashed at Emerus his blade held high over his head, ”DIE ARRANCAR SCUM!”. Emerus quickly sonidoed away from the charging shinigami just in time to be slammed by a fire ball from within the lantern causing him to tumble head over heels backwards into the sand. Now angry and slightly hurting Emerus called out ” Flujo, Niebla Consumidora”.

Suddenly Emerus is surrounded by a thick black mist which he rises out of the mist a five foot eight dark hooded figure with skeletal hand six spines pointing out of the back of the cloak. A white expressionless masked face and a silver English long sword in one hand. The green haired shinigami charged forward driving his blade into the center of Emerus’s robe hitting nothing but the mist wind he was shocked when Emeru’s sword came swinging down cleaving off the arm that held his Zanpakuto before a dark mist flowed out from beneath the robe obscuring the world from sight.

Within the mist Emerus felt at home relaxed and hungry for blood. Step one was to eliminate the weaker injured foe. Standing within the dark mist the green haired shinigami held his blade in a defensive position calling out to his ally, ”HAJI WHERE ARE YOU?”, quickly the response came ”OVER HERE”. The injured shinigami wasted no time stumbling towards his ally, however Emerus couldn’t allow that happed quickly he condensed the mist around himself and his left hand creating the general outline in the mist of the purple haired shinigami however extra fogged condensed around his hand making a lantern like shape hiding the green cero charging in his hand. Roughly four feet away from the edge of the mist near the green haired shinigami, Emerus called out his voice sounding exactly like the purple haired shinigami’s ”OVER HERE”. The green haired shinigami turned towards Emerus running at him only to be greeted by a point blank blast from the cero he had been charging.

Now alone but unknown to him, The purple shinigami stood in the darkness moving around looking for his lost companion and fearing the worst. From within the mist Emerus laughed his dark and ominous laughter seemingly coming from all directions as Emerus begins to throw his voice to different locations near his opponent. Attempting to follow the voice the purple haired shinigami begins to spin around looking for his lost opponent or his ally. One of the spears on the back of Emerus’s neck rises snaking through the mist to behind the shinigami. Quickly Emerus appeared leaving the mist to float right in front of his opponent and bringing his blade down in a vertical fashion towards his opponent’s skull. As the sword fell one of his spines shot through the mist and into the purple haired shinigami’s back hooking itself into his opponents skin. Weakening the power of his block, the purple shinigami hit the ground using his legs and knees to support his block while taking the pressure off his back.

Quickly Emerus receded into the mist, waiting a few seconds as he heard a scream from the shinigami as the blades on the tentacle began to spin as it retracted. The shinigami was injured he had a small hole in his back as he kneeled panting on the ground in the courtyard of Las Noches. Two more tentacles fired spearing his shoulders at the joint and raising the purple haired shinigami into the air. The mist receeded before the shinigami and there stood Emerus’s released form the two tentacle like spears coming out from behind the robes. ”I told you, you would be boring meal. But I suppose I had a bit of fun.”. With that Emerus drove his blade into the shinigami’s chest ending his life before he resealed his zanpakuto the dark and ominous figure replaced by the small green haired child. Who playfully skipped back through the doors of Las
Noches.

[Rebel Raven]

hello, 'll be reviewing your application.

The tummy growing as he eats seems kinda cartoony, even for Bleach, but I can let it slide.

Shape shifting: Basically self explanatory Emerus can transform into basically any shape size or color, he can also extend his reiatsu to shift his clothing as well. However he must retain either his horns or the strips behind his ears. He can cause his Zanpakuto to disappear into him when he shapes shifts but he cannot change it's shape or size.

(note while within him the zanpakuto takes up no space ie. he can become smaller than it.)

This ability is far, far too powerful.

Bubble Cero: Unlike most Cero’s the bubble cero is not a beam by concentrating reiatsu in his mouth and expanding it to a massive proportion Emerus can spit out up to six floating spheres with a one foot radius. The spheres do not speed as much as just float around the area until they hit a solid object sticking to them. With the vocal command ”Burst” The bubbles explode each with the strength of an average Cero. (The bubbles are extremely sticky and almost impossible to break a sword swiped at them will stick to it but a blast of some sort will send them flying.) This ability has a five post cool down to it.

So basically this is 6 grenades each with the strength of a full power Cero?

Advanced Sonido- Emerus is very talented with Sonido and can use it extremely well.

This is dangerously close to Sonido+/super speed. You're going to have to elaborate.

Great Bala: Simply a faster bala fired from the mouth of the mask, it has a black nucleus surrounded by a green outside. This bala is fifty percent faster than average Bala.

I don't think this will fly. Bala is hard enouh to dodge as is due to being so fast. Going faster is potentially godmod in it going so fast that it'd technically be impossible to dodge.

Engulfing Mist: The single most powerful ability Emerus has he cannot use alone, by landing on another Arrancar Emerus can cause his mask to fuse to the Arrancars flesh surrounding them in a light black mist. Once fused Emerus boosts the natural abilities of the arrancar by one tier marker if the arrancar is unreleased and by two if they are released. The fused mask appears to be growing out of the skin of wherever it connects to. If Emerus fuses to an unreleased Arrancar and the Arranacar releases his zanpkauto, he is automatically removed from the Arrancar.

Nae. This allows people to fight above tier, and leads to too many complications.

[aurius]

Hey, i think i fixed everything just a general break down of what I did is:

Edited natural abilities: I toned them both down cause they were too powerful.

Edited resurrection appearance: With the change in abilities I felt it better suited what I was going for.

Edited resurrection abilities: I changed the general concept of his abilities but kept a similar theme however now he works more like armor.

edited RP sample: just changed the ending to fit the new shape shifting ability.

[Rebel Raven]

Quote:Advanced Sonido- Emerus is very talented with Sonido and can use it extremely well.


This is dangerously close to Sonido+/super speed. You're going to have to elaborate.

Missed something.

Bala mist: By creating 12 bala, Emerus seals them within the smoke of his body and turns it into a whip made of bala which he can slap into his opponent like hitting them with several bala. The bala within the whip are quickly regenerated however he can only use the whip for two posts and must wait three posts after to use it again.

This seems a bit much.

Clotting mist: Emerus can cause his mist to solidify into an incredibly hard crystalline substance however he can only solidify two square feet of his body. This can be used to create patches of shield or club like covering at the tip of a tentacle of smoke. The two square feet do not need to be in a single space i.e. He can have a small one-foot club and a one-foot patch of armor at the same time.

This isn't going to be used on other people, is it?

Engulfing Mist: The single most powerful ability Emerus has he cannot use alone, by landing on another Arrancar Emerus can cause his mask to fuse to the Arrancars flesh surrounding them in a light black mist. The fused mask appears to be growing out of the skin of wherever it connects to. Once attached Emerus acts like a living armor he surrounds the arrancar with his mist and can do one of the three following things. Use bala mist, clotting mist, or turn the mist white allowing him to focus on and a heal a single injury.

A single injury is defined as any single injury effecting one part of the body, ie, a cut on the arm or leg. Emerus cannot heal internal injuries, and his healing abilities are basically limited to deep cuts and bad bruises.

While attached to a person Emerus can speak and use his abilities however he can only use one ability per post. Ie, he can only solidify, or heal, or use cero like abilities such as the bala whip, bubble cero, or healing mist.

No combiner abilities.

Shape shifting needs more limitations as it's a powerful ability.

[aurius]

modified I changed the following sections:

Personality

Arrancar powers

natural arrancar powers

resurrection appearance

resurrection abilities

history

and RP sample

(I basically re-vamped the char and made edits to account for the shift away from the combiner abilities focus.)

[Rebel Raven]

Shape shifting: Basically self explanatory Emerus can transform into any human, un-released arrancar, or vizard he has seen. He can also extend his reiatsu to shift his clothing as well. However he must retain either his horns or the strips behind his ears. If Emerus is hit while in this form in anyway enough to cause him pain he instantly reverts back to his regular form.

This still lacks sufficient weaknesses.

Advanced Sonido- Emerus is very talented with Sonido and can use it extremely well. As a result of this he has developed an amazing level of endurance with its use allowing him to use it rather frequently. (of course he will eventually tire if he uses it too much.)

does this include added speed?

Shrouding mist: By dissolving his cloak into his mist like reiatsu Emerus creates a thick black mist that surrounds his opponent, Emerus can control the density of this mist and create a maximum of a 10 foot moving radius of mist around his opponent. However, the mist must keep exactly one foot away from the skin of his opponent. The mist is non lethal but it cannot be blown away, as well Emerus can control the density of this mist to make it appear like there are figures in it.

Can't be defeated, can be made into a cage, etc. Rather godmodey.

Spider spines: The six spines sticking out of the back of Emerus’s cloak can be freely manipulated the inch in diameter spear head like spines are connected to an equally thick black rope like substance created from the mist. These robes extend up to ten feet and allows Emerus to strike using his spines. Once the spines enter a flesh they split horizontally and vertically the four sides coming down and anchoring them selves in the victims skin. The spines then begin to gather latent reiatsu within the body, though this would take years to drain anyone’s reiatsu enough to hinder them in a fight it does charge up the spines and is quite painful. Once embedded the spine will detonate with a very small but powerful blast if the black rope is broken or the spine is pulled out.

(Note: severed or detonated spines grow back in two posts)

Needs to be proof read to get rid of spelling errors. I.E. Robes.

The Draining part needs more details.

Needs more limitations to justify making small craters in a person when they have explosives detonated inside them.

[aurius]

done editing, the things i adjusted:

shapeshifting: added another limitation, if this isn't sufficient would you mind suggesting something as this is ability i really want the character to have.

advanced sonido: no this does not effect speed i clarified that within the application as well.

shrouding mist: replaced the word density with thickness, this cannot be used to prevent attacks it is purely smoke he can adjust how much there is in certain places, the effects are all visual.

Spider spines: I changed these around because I felt after some thought that making them explode was a bit overpowered especially draining their reiatsu to do so. So I re-vamped the ability trying to keep a certain flare to it rather than just have tipped tentacles.

rp sample: simply re-did the last fighting paragraph to account for the change in spider spines.

[Rebel Raven]

The Shapeshifting needs a few more description, IMO. Does his internal organs shift? Does he gain any new powers from the new shapes? Does the voice change? How complete is the impersonation?

Shrouding mist: By dissolving his cloak into his mist like reiatsu Emerus creates a thick black mist that surrounds his opponent, Emerus can control the thickness of this mist and create a maximum of a 10 foot moving radius of mist around his opponent. However, the mist must keep exactly one foot away from the skin of his opponent. The mist is non lethal but it cannot be blown away, as well Emerus can control the thickness of this mist to make it appear like there are figures in it.

I don't like the fact that it can't be blown away. That means he can, in theory, keep a person in the mist for the entire fight, confusing the opponent indefinitely.

It needs some sort of weaknesses.

What happens if someone uses Sonido/shunpo/etc. to try and get out of it?
Can Emerus see through it?
How fast does the mist move?
Is it completely unable to physically affect things? I.E. Creating air currents with the movement, etc.

Spider spines: The six spines sticking out of the back of Emerus’s cloak can be freely manipulated the inch in diameter spear head like spines are connected to an equally thick black rope like substance created from the mist. These ropes extend up to ten feet and allow Emerus to strike using his spines. The spines can sprout three spinning blades from through out the tip that jut out a half-inch and begin to spin. These blades only appear if the spine is exposed to blood.

So basically he has tentacles with a trio of saw blades at the tips?
Does the regeneration extend to any other limbs besides the tentacles?

Bleeding mist: A two step ability, first an opponent must remained injured with an open wound for two posts. From this point the blood dissolves into a red mist, which flows into Emerus’s mouth creating a connection between Emerus and his opponent’s wound. From there on out Emerus can surge his reiatsu through the wound causing an extremely painful burning sensation, almost as if someone branded the wound with a red-hot poker.

Does the blood inhalation do anything to heal/drain?

This ability has no limitations what so ever short of having to have the wonds open for 2 posts which is really likely considering so few people can actually heal themselves.

There's no real defense against it either aside from being one in a hundred to have any sort of rapid regeneration.

How often does he get to do this anyhow?

[Otahu]

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